Villa Ismailia, Wael Elseliseli (3D)

[fattkid]

Looks pretty well done....If I had a crit, it would really just be the composition. The car cut off on the side and bottom, as well as the "cramped" feel of the image, could maybe be reapproached. Zooming out a bit would maybe help a bit. Use the sidewalk on the bottom of the image to frame things, and use it in unison with the sky above to create a better composition. Sorta feels like I'm looking through a tiny window, and there's more to see, but I can't see it. That's my 2 bits. Good job and keep it up.

[WHM]

Thx for ur comment bro ... All this points i'll put in mind ...

[Bryan Y]

I also think for that composition you should employ a lens shift to eliminate the convergence of vertical lines. Use a view camera in real life to learn the tricks of architectural photography. See this link to learn more: http://www.camerapedia.org/wiki/Sinar

[WHM]

Thx for comment and the link ...

[WHM]

Thanks ...

[pixicata]

really el modeling 3agny gedan:thumbsup: ma3da el car mesh 3arfa i feel somthing wrong with it
also i think if the sky was blue :) this will give the scene cheerful feeling
But really Well Done

[maminghui120]

:scream: It`s great! I will hardwo rk as you!

[JGW]

except the car, the dark sky and the sunny effect, every thing is fine.

[mithee]

nice architecture but the strong light and hard shadow doesn't match the sky well

and as an architect i think 2d tree might match the arch well than the 3d tree，3d tree is
so cute，but your car is real

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