asian girl head.

[AshodT]

this is some hair.

[Maximus Groff]

Going good!

Whats ur render time ?

:wavey:

[AshodT]

hey Maxilus,thanks.

my render time is 2 minutes.

[AshodT]

i added gravity to the hair.

[AshodT]

started the body.crits?

[KolbyJukes]

Very good stuff.

What app are you using?

-Kol

[XTitan]

Gotta love those asians(i hope i don't get any messages about this). Great start i can tell that it's asian without the textures. Very well made and clean model, keep it up.:bounce: :bounce: :eek:

[wgreenlee1]

Very good form on the basic shape...lose that hairdo though.
Looking cool!:thumbsup:

[Angelus26]

Nice! I'll second losing the hair do though, it's seriously huge.

[xerozz]

I dont really like the hair, other than that gj.

[Flash FROG]

The model is very good, the head looks really smooth and clean.
It should look really awesome once you finish and put some cloth on the body.
Cant wait to see the finished product.
Nice Work.:thumbsup:

[Digiegg]

wow.. the modeling is really good. I can tell you are making an asian person. good job!

[Wiz]

look good ashy :)

[AshodT]

hey guys,thanks for your crits.
heres an update on her boobs,until i show you more from her.

[AshodT]

heres a small something,just to show my progress until i get more.

crits?

oh and yeah,i use 3dsmax 5.

[WatanabeJubei]

Looks nice, but it looks to me like her clavicles are a bit too high up on her torso.

Other than that, it's a great rack you got goin there.

[AshodT]

heyWatanabeJubei.
yeah you were right,they were a bit off,but i didnt work on that part yet. i guess i concentrated too much on other parts. there are lots of wrong things yet,with the ches and belly,thatll get fixed.

here the update on the collar bones.

[AshodT]

i have completly reworked the abdomen area.

crits?

[Tocy]

Yes, grats, much better!:) The belly:) not so artificial now, but maybe some detail (ribs etc.) could make it better. And below the breast, the angle of the chest and the abdomen is very sharp, and uniform, maybe make it smoother. Hope it helps
Yeah, and look at the collarbones, they need some curvature
Good work, keep going!
:thumbsup:

[AshodT]

sometime i didnt poste.

im going slow on this one right now.

heres the update:

[FLOw]

excellent body and the head is nicely modeled, but not something that would turn me on :D dont know about the arms and hands, but the other dudes probably do :scream: :thumbsup:

[p0lym0rph]

verry nice modeling,but the hands are too flat :D

[XTitan]

everything looks great, work on the hands, and i'm not really sure but i think the nose should be a little flatter and wider. But i love the work so far. Keep it up.

[AshodT]

thanks for the crits.

polymorph: les mains etaient en effet un peu fins,but that flat look stands out because of the hand pose a bit more.i did get them a bit "heavier".

XTitan,im gonna keep the nose as is,i guess the way your saying,it will make her much more asian,but i want to keep some european look to her.

anyways,heres the update,with her up cloath added.

[AshodT]

heres an update:

[AshodT]

more fixing. im thinking to begin the rigging.

what do you think,is this finished work?

[Lukashi]

Hey this looks like really solid modelling, good job, i think you could add even more details though :thumbsup:

[laker]

I agree, Slightly more detail in the arms/neck/legs will give it that tiny boost to make it look absolutely perfect:applause:

[AshodT]

thanks guys.

i dont know if ill add more detail onto this. i intend to rig and animate it,and i want to let that meaty look to her.
i've already passed the 22 000 polys (unsmoothed). rigging it will be hell already.

thanks again,and ill post more soon.

if you see a place that really need detailing,say it please!

:)

[rikimountain]

great work... but, ain`t the feet a bit to tall?!?!? especially for asian ladies... haven`t they all got those lotus-feet?!?
really cool man!

[AshodT]

hey riki,thanks for the crit.
what you say is probably right,but she is tall right now,copared to actual asian people. do being tall,i think the feet suit her?

[AshodT]

heres a shot of feet.not perfect,i know.

[XTitan]

I love everything but the feet. Seriously these aren't sexy feet. I think they need to be a little bit smaller and finer. look up Kobe Tai. Try and find a good pic of her feet. She's literally anatomically perfect. Good luck, keep us posted. :buttrock: :buttrock: :buttrock:

[Bob27]

nice work man ! wish to see it animated!

[clojster]

OMG! Her breasts and everything... she turns me on man!! :applause: :airguitar
Agree that her foot looks strange though

[AshodT]

hey guys thanks!!

XTitan: lol man,i looked for that Kobe Tai,only found porn sites...:surprised i did change the feet thoug :)


Bob27: thanks!

yEd: :shame: she's mine:cool: hehe

anyway,ish me luc people,im starting to rig this mesh now. (25 000 poly unsmoothed! yiikes).

[yosemite]

Hi Ashod, your work looks very nice. I've been reading through the repies and don't want to repeat anyones comments so I'll just add that perhaps you might want to look into 'desymmetrizing' her a bit. Add some chaos to the mesh, even slight alterations make a big difference. As I said before, I like it, I think it's looking good. I'm very curious as to what you plan to do with the animation.

YoYo

[xeno]

very well done! I really like her breasts in the way that u havent exaggerated them, i dont know how to put it in english, but to me they look more real then other cg breasts ive seen so far, does that make sense?

to me it does:D

[AshodT]

hum,its been like two months.

i never riged the girl,still optimizing the mesh on and on.
this is the latest update.

[Cryptite]

Good work! I'm liking what i see so far. As for the breasts. I agree with xeno; I think i can simplify what he means. You didn't make the cg character have large perfect breasts that all us horny men wish women did. You toned it down a little and made up for the more realistic breast size.

[AshodT]

latest update!!

[AshodT]

latest update!!

edit: sorry for double post,it seems i dont have permission to delete MY own post....

[Wiz]

Ash its looking really solid great stuff ,can't wait to see more.
there is really nice sublte detail on the stomach reigon ,really makes it belivable! :)

[Maya_Fanatic]

hi dude.. very nice work done... overall body is pretty nice and sexy ;) nice modelling.. could you please show wire frames..of whole body and close ups... (wirez)
thanx mate... keep up the good work...

[MunCHeR]

Dude nice model, what app are you using(just poly modelling?) I'm trying to model Sung Hi Lee but i cant find a good side shot of her head, damned models always look at the camera, could you post your ref images for me? please

Cheers MunCH

[XTitan]

Keep up the great work and keep showing it to us.

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