Octiger-Hybrid creature., Scott Findlay (2D)

[Synesthesiac]

Very interesting concept. I like your colouration of the octiger.

I have two critiques:
First, the tiger's eye does not seem to be trained on its victim. It looks a little bit distant, even though it is making a fierce face.

Second, it looks like you put a lot less work into making the human look real than you spent on the monster. The human's skin is very pasty if he is meant to be someone who spends a lot of time outside in the sun, and his face seems a little lower quality than the rest of the picture.

I like it overall though, thank you for posting it.

[zimfin]

Very interesting concept. I like your colouration of the octiger.

I have two critiques:
First, the tiger's eye does not seem to be trained on its victim. It looks a little bit distant, even though it is making a fierce face.

Second, it looks like you put a lot less work into making the human look real than you spent on the monster. The human's skin is very pasty if he is meant to be someone who spends a lot of time outside in the sun, and his face seems a little lower quality than the rest of the picture.

I like it overall though, thank you for posting it.
Thanks for the critique! I agree 100% I only had one week for this challenge so I did not get everything as polished as I should. Admittedly, I forgot that the man should be more tanned. When I noticed that the eye did not focus on the man, I remember thinking to myself that there might be other men or something that it was focusing on, but as they don't show, I ought to change it. I will definitely be working further on this soon. :)

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