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dandan
03-21-2008, 09:10 PM
Hi all!

I hope im not too late, my days are kinda crowded nowadays, but i really wanted to do this. I choosed the invoker class, the main idea is to make a harmful (but also mean, and evil) looking child, with a big grimoire, and some big, almost hellhound-like dog he has bound with some magic... anyway, i try to come up with a decent story afterwards :D.

-EDIT- the story goes something like this (dont expect anything fancy, im very tired :) ): The peacefull village of Morningshine was always special in New-England. But noone knew that the village priest had a dark secret - he stole all the hate and anger with his sinister magic, and transfered it into the orphan Josiah, who was his servant, noone ever saw. This way he could rule without the fear that anyone would get in his way. But the day the machines came everything changed - even he couldnt escape death, but there was someone who did - even with his boy weakened by the dark magic of the priest, after the machines left, Josiah still managed to get the grimoire of the sorcerer. He saw him perform magic day by day, so it was an easy task for him to heal his wounds - and with all that hate and anger in his hearth he summoned a beast so dreaded, nothing could get in his way.

thats the best i could come up with so late, now i think i take a few days off :)


Good luck to you all! :thumbsup: So here's the concept sketch first, i hope i can finish in time, and that you'll like it -

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/2747/josiahsketch03yn7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

dandan
03-21-2008, 09:15 PM
and heres for the start a few wip's..

http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/3770/josiahwip01po5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/5835/dogwip01xf2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


I'll countinue tomorrow :).

monsitj
03-22-2008, 04:39 PM
nice concept , you pick the great alternative against big muscle guy thing ,
wait for more update , goodluck!

dandan
03-22-2008, 08:10 PM
Hey Monsit - thanks for your kind words! :)

Ye, i wanted to avoid the thuggish character type, there are a lot of guys much better than me, who are probably going for that. Anyway, heres an update on the head, and the collar.

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/1552/josiahwip02bob0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

SorinLupu
03-23-2008, 04:21 PM
Nice start on the collar region. Keeping up!

dandan
03-23-2008, 05:45 PM
Pheonix - Thx! Its hard to countinue after seeing your thread! :thumbsup:

Today i did some work on the dog - still needs work, but i also have to push things if i wanna make it till the deadline. Anyway, still 2 weeks to go, that should be enough, if i dont get to much stress at work.

http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/8966/dogwip02wi4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

walrus
03-23-2008, 06:14 PM
Nice modeling work so far, especially the musculature on the hound and the boy's cloth wrinkles. Is the book going to be his Artifact? How were you planning on integrating the CGTalk logo/colors? Anyhow, good luck!

dandan
03-23-2008, 06:42 PM
walrus - thx for your post! :) Ye, the his magic book will be his artifact, the logo will be on the middle, and i'll try to apply the colors to it somehow - i make some paintovers when we cross that bridge. Heres the book (just a placeholder at this point, but its going to be something like this), and the possibble placing of the logo:

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/4629/bookwip01yd3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

hakanpersson
03-23-2008, 07:39 PM
Hope you have time to finish this. Really good concept, and the sculpting turned out great too, especially the boy's face.

rota
03-23-2008, 11:03 PM
Hi!

Looks GREAT!
I really like this overall dark sepia tone, I think it would be great to paint the textures in this style (or maybe its just me). I hope you finish it!
Keep being amazing :thumbsup:



rota

dandan
03-24-2008, 10:07 AM
Thx guys, your comments are very encouraging! :) i try my best to finish in time, it shouldn't be impossible. I liked that color too, i try to match them up, but i have to use the team colors too, so im afraid that would draw too much attention with that bright red. we'll see... I'll post some updates tongiht, i hope i can make some progress.

dandan
03-24-2008, 07:19 PM
ok, as promised some updates on the kiddo - still bald, but i'll make the hair only from texture i think. I know more after some tests. i can make only slower progress over the week, but i try to work over some nights too. here are the pics, im quite happy with the shoes, not so much with his pants. maybe i put in some bigger wrinkles, or overlapping :shrug:.
http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/8122/josiahwip03yz7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/2757/josiahwip03biy8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

dandan
03-30-2008, 12:21 PM
didnt had too much time over the week, but i could do some work on the dog. hopefully i can start retopo and unwrap them at the start of the week. That 5 day extension was a real lifesaver.

http://img01.picoodle.com/img/img01/4/3/30/f_DogWip03m_c795d33.jpg (http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?img=/4/3/30/f_DogWip03m_c795d33.jpg&srv=img01)

RobThornely
03-31-2008, 07:21 PM
I love it. Cool concept, great contrast in physical form but they are both evil little bastardos! I think the boy's clothes are trully inspired, like a puritan. Sweet sculpting too

Mau-Zer
03-31-2008, 07:47 PM
I like the characters a lot especially the hound, are you gone go for "The company of wolfs" (see attachment) look or are you gone give it hair ?

bzsolt
04-01-2008, 12:19 AM
Hi!
I like the concept! The non symmetrical details are cool on the models. Don't need more words here... :) Keep it up bro, and good luck to finish your job on this, in time ! :thumbsup: :bounce:

dandan
04-01-2008, 12:13 PM
thx guys for your support :)

Maurits - the dog is going to have skin similar to this i think - (without the hair)

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/3737/23198495kh5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

more updates comming soon :)

dandan
04-06-2008, 08:07 PM
more updates. all stuff is wip (the pedestal, textures etc.) polycount is around 8900, but i wanna improve some parts that deform badly. also there are some seams, and normal map artifacts, but i'll fix those in notime. still working on the hair, also testing some shaders. i kinda have to hurry now, wish me luck :D

http://img03.picoodle.com/img/img03/4/4/6/f_BookWip02m_add5f5a.jpg (http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?img=/4/4/6/f_BookWip02m_add5f5a.jpg&srv=img03)

http://img03.picoodle.com/img/img03/4/4/6/f_Retopo01m_39d020f.jpg (http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?img=/4/4/6/f_Retopo01m_39d020f.jpg&srv=img03)

Mau-Zer
04-06-2008, 10:45 PM
Hi Dandan,

Looking good !
What do you mean by I have to hurry ? You do know of the new deadline right ? (12 April)

Greetz

andy6308AAA
04-08-2008, 02:45 PM
Hey. Very nice character, the sculpt works great.
http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?f=234&t=604654&page=4&pp=15

rota
04-08-2008, 05:19 PM
Extremely nice update! I love the overall feeling of this piece, I think with a good specular map, and good lighting It will be Outstanding. The boy is a real eye candy,he reflects pure evil without any stereotipycal accesories, or a zombie arm. I'm really looking forward to this piece, and I'm absolutely positive that you Will finish it.


Cheers
rota

dandan
04-08-2008, 06:42 PM
thx guys for the moral boost, i think i need it for the last several days :).

Maurits - ye, i know, but still a lot to do, only did a few lighting tests, and theres still some texture painting, normal map, and mesh fixing left to do...

next year i sure start earlyer :D

hakanpersson
04-08-2008, 08:10 PM
Nice progress on the texture so far. But the dog is a real chicken, the tail between his legs!

I would also give the entire folder of the book the same color. Silly tiny crit, but it looks like the pages blends together with the folder when the inside got pretty much same color as the pages. Aswell, it would be nice if you could get rid of the texture stretch on the ground, thats the first thing I saw.

About the pose, it would be nice if both the dog and the boy were actually looking at the same thing, or at least if they would seem a bit more teamed up. Right now the boy is thinking about algorithms while the dog is about to attack the camera. Besides that, the pose is perfect.

Is that the next edition of d'artist he is holding btw:) ?
Jokes aside, great work!

dandan
04-08-2008, 09:04 PM
hakanpersson - kinda liked that pose with the tail (saw some fighting wolves with their tail between their legs), i dont wanted him to look too happy... :) you're right about the book, thats just some colors dropped on it yet, still have to work on that one. the final shot will make them look more teamed up - but i still havent figured out the final angle. thanks for your feedback, its sure helpfull to get some opinions from others with fresh eyes.

anyway, heres a shot without specular, or fancy shaders, just maya, with some lights...

http://img36.picoodle.com/img/img36/4/4/8/f_Retopo02m_4865700.jpg (http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?img=/4/4/8/f_Retopo02m_4865700.jpg&srv=img36)

bzsolt
04-08-2008, 11:11 PM
Ye, nice updates indeed. his face remaind me a little bit Kicsi's face :D you know, Gabor :D nice podium ;) :D i think you can done it in time, and it will be cool !

dandan
04-09-2008, 10:10 PM
bzsolt - ye, the kid sure looks like him a bit :)

only minor updates, i'll make shader tests, and a better specular tommorrow. need sleep...

http://img03.picoodle.com/img/img03/4/4/9/f_Retopo03m_ce08f0d.jpg (http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?img=/4/4/9/f_Retopo03m_ce08f0d.jpg&srv=img03)

Agostinuke
04-10-2008, 06:36 PM
Awesome scary awesome :)

hakanpersson
04-10-2008, 08:17 PM
Super sweet, the books looks much better now. It's better now also when the boy glance towards the camera.

Some nice lights and better AA and this could be really cool. Still my cgs favorite:thumbsup:

hiroshilee
04-11-2008, 05:31 PM
I like it! ! ! so cool!

dandan
04-12-2008, 05:01 AM
thx guys for your support :) im pretty tired now... also, i didnt take the 1000*1000 quite serious, only for maximum width-height. kinda lowres with 2 characters, and front and back view.

http://img30.picoodle.com/img/img30/4/4/11/f_JosiahWinnim_5c722cb.jpg (http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?img=/4/4/11/f_JosiahWinnim_5c722cb.jpg&srv=img30)

http://img30.picoodle.com/img/img30/4/4/11/f_JosiahConstm_6565d80.jpg (http://www.picoodle.com/view.php?img=/4/4/11/f_JosiahConstm_6565d80.jpg&srv=img30)

LaughingBun
04-12-2008, 08:00 AM
nice job! this piece is creepy as hell! i think the background you chose ruins alot of the nice contrast you had though and takes lessons your normal map, which is sad because your sculpting is the best part!

andy6308AAA
04-14-2008, 03:31 PM
Cool, lookin like a game character!
http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?f=234&t=604654&page=7&pp=15

RaresH
04-14-2008, 03:56 PM
Very good work on this Daniel. Excellent sculpting. Character really shine there. The lighting I think could use some more work. Good Luck!

dandan
04-17-2008, 09:19 PM
thx for replies - ye, i know, i could have used some more time, and that front AND back view kinda trashed my plans, but hey - maybe i'll be more satisfied next year... i always try to improve :)

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