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metalman123456123
03-20-2008, 03:06 PM
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Title: Speed Test and Depth Test
Name: David Lesperance
Country: United States
Software: 3ds max, VRay, ZBrush

There is more stuff going into the shot but I wanted to get some feeback to help fix any issues. This was done in 6-8 hrs and is based Tim Jones work for Sigraph. Done with max (an environment dudes best friend :)) Feedback is welcome and needed. I just did an update based on some of the feedback, the bottom one is the new one. The top is old one. Thanks
FrankCSlimski
03-20-2008, 10:37 PM
Damn, David...you're a submission machine. It looks good, but I have 2 problems with it, albeit minor ones.

1. Those white clouds that seem to be in the forefront just don't look right.

2. The mountains are too clearly discernable. Atmospheric perspective should make them a little less saturated and a little less detailed.
redbyte
03-20-2008, 10:45 PM
I agree with frank. The mountains and clouds are what look off.
The foreground looks spot on.

Fantastic work for 6-8hrs!
metalman123456123
03-21-2008, 02:27 PM
Heres the new one the top is old the bottom is new. I've started another shot so I'm movin on unless something is really bothering someone :)
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