Alien Environment....feedback please

[Shiki]

I love the first one. It reminds me of soe kind of central core of an alien ship. I like the roughness of the brush strokes, but you could sharpen and define any details in there. That would definitely take it up a notch.
The second one looks to be a good start, but it seems that you need to clear up and define what shapes and buildings you have and then add in detail. I'd also like it to be a little brighter, so figure out where a light source would come from and add in highlights. I understand if it's one of those gloomy atmospheric environments, so the highlights don't have to be extreme. As they say, a little can go a long way. Good luck. ;)

[Raptorscythe]

Both have very cool sense of lighting. However, I feel like there is not a whole lot clarity in what we are looking at. I would love to see these images more refined. Give us a real sense of depth between foreground and background.

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