character: 2D WW2 zombie

[suttercane]

thanks for the wonderful feedback guys. it will really help when I turn my stuff in to my teacher to graduate this quarter.

[JediKillr]

interesting work....
few things..
the nose is way too thin, even with bone alone it would be thicker also looks like you need to work on noses a bit, theyre hard to get so.. good luck :P

also the eyes don't really seem to fit in with the piece, too glowy?

pull the cheeks out a bit and think about how the skull is structured.
most people don't think about it because there is so much flesh that they don't realize where the skull is relational to the face. the eye socket starts at the eyebrow and goes halfway down the nose, and then it has the cheekbones
you seem to have missed the bulk of the cheekbones, which in a zombie looks kind of odd

of course i could just be an idiot, good work though, better than i could do :)

[suttercane]

thanks jedi

yea the eyes bug me also.. think i will fix those.

as for the face structure your right. I wasnt going for super realistic, but i think I definitely could fix the nose and bring the cheeks out more.

[snipa101]

the dog tag seems a little small to me.

[Daniel]

Originally posted by suttercane
thanks for the wonderful feedback guys. it will really help when I turn my stuff in to my teacher to graduate this quarter.

Yo Mama! Just 5hours later and not reply? What a bad world :p

okay okay, back to topic.

Never seen a zombie, but how about some visible bones (edit: parts of his skull...u know) in his face .

I don't see the POINT why it should be a WW2 Zombie, could also a Vietnam Zombie (or any other war).

Remove that grey background! Add some trees or a war field...something...even if it is blury :)

So and now, go and watch some Zombie Movies... :eek:

hehe, have fun with your pencil :airguitar
Cya.

[suttercane]

thanks guys,

snipa- yea other people have said the same... DOH!!

Daniel- haha... thanks, but it was more than 5 hours it was over a day. Im just stressed out from trying to get everything ready this quarter for graduation. visible bones might be something i can add if i have the time. Also yes the background needs to go. yes i do need to watch another zombie movie, you can never have enough :)

glad you liked it though.

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