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JoshM
05-07-2003, 12:56 AM
Hey Guys,

Just wanted to post the first car I've modelled for some constructive criticism. It's still a wip so any cc will be greatly appreciated.

-Josh-

rocarpen
05-07-2003, 01:06 AM
Looks good! Hard to make out some of details due to what I guess is the JPEG compression, though.

A few comments: the space around the handles on the driver's door looks a little warped. As does the front wheel well.

Other than that, bravo!

:applause:

dg3d
05-07-2003, 01:15 AM
Wow very good and i tend to agree with rocarpen, the places he mention look warped.

But the rest is :thumbsup:

AdamT
05-07-2003, 03:11 AM
Overall it looks really good. In addition to what's been mentioned, it seems like there's something odd going on with the rear quarter panel.

michaeli
05-07-2003, 05:27 AM
Seems another cool car will born! Very nice model!:thumbsup:

medula
05-07-2003, 03:30 PM
Everything looks very good. But I see some issues at just about every parting line along the side of the car. It's lacking surface continuity. Make sure your points are along the same axis for that particular vector at the parting lines.

This seems to be a popular problem when do such tight and surface accurate work.


A quick way to check for good surface continuity is drop a shader on the car that is very glossy and do a decent render from several views. The more the view looks along an axis, the more accuracy you should be able to squeak out of the model.

Sweet model, keep up the good work! :thumbsup:

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