Unstill life: Fetus

[jcjimenez]

hi!!!! anybody there? :surprised

[Mr.FeelNothing]

I don't think having an ambilical cord would make it look bloody. Non the less, it looks nice.

[ed209]

It kinda feels like something is missing. I think you should add the umbilical cord. Be a nice touch to finish this lovely piece of work off.

[twitchy]

it needs some waxy stuff all over him/her, to protect it you know ( dont want to get into that subject again, i hated school, hate school, always hate school.)

[ansiaaa]

i like the 'stuff' floating around the fetus, but... even as an artistic work, the obelical cord is missing. you should add it.

work more on the feet, they are too plain!
and have a look at the bottom of the body too.

maybe some texture for the veins underskin should give it more 'feeling'.

i really like the work on the lights and how you modeled the head!

[Sceme]

i think this is good as it is, because i see very peacefull and calm mood on this one...just flowing in there....very artistic image:thumbsup:

[victor throe]

would it be a little more transleucent?

[jcjimenez]

thanks all!

Reading the mails I'm reconsidering the umbilical cord and I'm going to include it. Also, I'll make more translucent effect (the sss is totally faked). Beside this, the material include some veins effect, but I can see now that is very clear... I'll increase it too.

Apart from this, some technical notes:

3ds max 5
VRay 1.02.09v
Digital Fusion

render time: 41 seconds!!!!! :)

[Chaos Maximus]

yeah, i would increase the sss, if you want artsy without the umbilicle cord then skip being in the womb, make is somthing else, space or some paradice or something

good luck

[hwachai]

very good lighting ... !!! :scream: :scream:

[LowEndFrequency]

you should check out some tutorials on subsurface scattering. I think this is one place where it couldn't be put to a better use.

[raden]

interesting object :eek:

crits: beside the cord, i'd like to mention about the pose, proportion and texture.

check out massive attack's music video. and the new music klip (i cant think of whom) it has some freakin shoots on fetus inside the womb. all of these veins and skins and liquid and blood. tripy!

[jgb]

imo the fetus is too evolved for that huge space...
i don't want to see the mother of that, if he has that huge space =)
i think that is the wrong thing...

[jcjimenez]

Hi again,
I'm reading all of your replies and I think you're all right. I have to reconsider the scene... same idea, but wrong concept. I'm going to work on the cord, the space of the mum (yeah! the child can play soccer inside it :) ), increase the sss effect (fake!) and get a more realistic concept approach.

Anyway... THX! :bounce:

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