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Matellis 03-10-2008, 11:08 PM Hey everyone ,
Here is a matte that I started over the weekend . Just about done now. I am going to make the town a bit bigger because right now the moon is stealing the show. Also I might do something about the clouds. Some crits would be great :D
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/6210/snowmatterender09tt3.jpg
Plate:
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/1157/95355284707425smallng9.jpg
Cheers!
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Rockhoppermedia
03-10-2008, 11:26 PM
Beautiful, reminds me of yorkshire, it would make a great book cover, sell it
make some money who cares if it becomes a xmas card or postcard, we all have to eat.
Really like this alot.
Respect mate
Rich :thumbsup:
bechira
03-11-2008, 09:16 AM
yes. very nice. congrats.
Akajork
03-11-2008, 09:26 AM
wow love this mood:) very nice indeed!
Yea you can make this pic come alive more by adding some nice and thicker clouds. I love that moonlight glow and some soft clouds that are being lit by it would really make this piece.
Great work!
Halford
03-11-2008, 11:04 AM
ok...now I'm bored of your work..they are all good...do you make bad ones too?
:D
I really like the atmosphere and some of the little details. Personally I would have use a little bit more of details for suggesting the village..and I wounder if second one a far away would be nice in the image or not....
I would love to see a little cloud addition, but not too much, I like the sense of open space the clear sky gives to the image.
well...those are my 2c....looking forward to the next step.
Hal.
JJASSO
03-11-2008, 05:42 PM
I agree with the above comments, this is really great, and yes you're right you should make the city bigger to make it your main focal node, no critics from me, I find everything here just great ( maybe be more detailed clouds )
Matellis
03-11-2008, 06:45 PM
Thanks for all the great comments!
Rockhoppermedia: Thanks :D haha I could try and sell this , but right now its all about the demo reel that I will probably never get done!
bechira: I am glad you like it :D
Akajork: Thats something I will test out . Maybe I can use the clouds to also bring the views eye over to the town in some way.
Halford: haha I think we all make bad ones . The key is to start with thumbnail sketches I think ( thou I didnt do that with this one) also I am very lucky to have some people that I chat with on a day to day basis that give me solid and honest crits. They have been a huge part of my developement as an artist.
And I do agree about the clear sky . thou I will try out some cloud cover. But I always enjoy the night time more when there is no cloud cover and you can see the moon and stars . So I will play around a bit before I do anything final :D
jamesvfx: Hey thanks man! I am glad you like my image :D I will make the town a bit bigger and add some more detail . It doesnt read the best at the moment . A lot more light there will help I think. I couldnt find any references for the town so I ended having to paint all of it , which I dont mind at all. So I am mostly trying to suggest that its a town. you dont want to see a close up view thats for sure haha
I hope to have an update soon which will probably be the finished peice. Thanks again everyone for the crits and kind words :D
Cheers!
Suirebit
03-12-2008, 01:52 PM
I always enjoy your work man, you have such a good understanding of shape and color :)
nickmarshallvfx
03-12-2008, 05:53 PM
Well u already know that I love the way this is headed. Keep on man, im gonna be bugging you for updates again by this evening! :thumbsup:
Nick
Matellis
03-13-2008, 12:48 AM
Suirebit: hey thanks a lot man :D
Nick: lol I have an update!
So I finished this matte tonight . Hope you guys enjoy it. It was very fun to create and thanks for all the input guys! really helped out :D
http://features-temp.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/144529/144529_1205365115_large.jpg
Cheers!
JJASSO
03-13-2008, 01:03 AM
way better, now the city is the focal node, way to go!
RQuack
03-13-2008, 01:27 AM
Really nice, Matt. Well done! :thumbsup:
nickmarshallvfx
03-13-2008, 03:28 AM
See I told you it was better than Halo maps ;)
Hehe, nice to see if finished mate, looks great!
Nick
Halford
03-13-2008, 06:07 PM
Very nice ending, too bad you did not keep the idea of the flying donky on fron of the moon I mailed to you last night ;) .
Very nice atmosphere...I can nearly feel the cold snow... Not much to say, just nice job!
Hal.
Akajork
03-14-2008, 04:05 PM
beautiful! you have this in wallpaper size :bowdown: widescreen?
love it! city is in the focal now and I cant stop staring at the foreground.. lovely atmoshpere!
Matellis
03-14-2008, 06:30 PM
jamesvfx: Thanks James I am happy you like it!
RQuack: thanks man!
space-sprayer : lol Nothing is better then forging halo maps! joking! :D
Halford: I could have swore I added that donkey , maybe its just hard to see at this res! ;)
Akajork Thanks man , yeah I can post up a wallpaper. Thou the town looks like total crap in high detail lol lots of scribbles.
Cheers guys!
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