Female Fantasy Warrior

[mhunt]

first view

[mhunt]

second view

[mhunt]

third view

[FallenSwordsman]

Looks good - but she does look like she's in shock with her eyes that wide open. Overall clothing design is looking good. Presumably this is aiming at stylized rather than realistic?

[mhunt]

thanks, and you're right, I still need more practice before I can say that I'm doing a realistic character

[mhunt]

here she is with some weapons, critics welcome:)

[hanzo]

:thumbsup: pretty cool, I think you should make her gun belt bigger and thicker also make it hang of her hips more, but thats just me :applause: also some ik work please

[mhunt]

and another view:)

[mhunt]

your're right, that belt should be bigger and I still need to add textures and background.

[mhunt]

an update with textures, still have to work on the face and hand, sorry for the small size, you can see a bigger version at my website:D

[mhunt]

another view

[mhunt]

hey people, give me feedback to improve the model :D

[Krisc]

bring her eyes closer together...

[katon]

one of the things that bothers me isthat the lower part of the leg looks to short, thants all. i hope that helps

[Stahlberg]

Hi! The folds on the pants are looking better, maybe you can extend with some tiny folds upwards a bit, merging the wrinkly area better into the smooth one?
There seems to be a crease from the forehead down to the clavicles, try to round that a bit. And a touch more detail on the nostrils maybe.
The grooves on her abdomen are still looking a bit sharp, I think the cross-sections should be slightly more like a sine-wave if you know what I mean. Or maybe it's just that they are too smooth and regular, maybe a touch of randomizing might help.
But as I said, a very good start. wire frame?

[mhunt]

Thanks people !

I'll check on your coments to improve the model adn will post the progress. I can try to post the wireframe but since I'm new posting I only have 20k max for each attached image so the wire may not be too big

[mhunt]

here are link to the wireframes, couldn't post big images here:annoyed:

http://www.planeta3.net/images/3d/huntress_w0001.jpg

http://www.planeta3.net/images/3d/huntress_w0002.jpg

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