Oceania, Artspace comp

[JJASSO]

I like the concept, it would me amazing to see in real life, I have some suggestions though
I believe you need cotnrast between light and shadow, right now eventhough you have a background key light, everything looks flat, the lines on the handrails need lots of work, they don't look good as it is now,you need contact shadows on the bushes and the other elements as well, the materials need to be defined, the cristal reflection on the domes, the water too,I would try to work in a rough 3D scene just to get the proper perspective, light contrast, and take that as a start to paint, the characters you have there,I think are not helping much, and if you want this looks like an architecure visualization , I would take at some references first, what kind of lighting do the architects do to make his work look better. hope this helps

[Rockhoppermedia]

Thank you for your response jaime,


Yep it always helps to get a second perspective, I had a feeling there was something wrong and you have helped by highlighting it. This was a hard paint to do and i was struggling with it big time. I will not have a chance to correct this for a few weeks so I will file this into my folder. I have a folder of all my mattes that do need alot of work and when I relook at them some time later I learn from where I went wrong.

Thank you

Rich

[hardy-guardy]

Good concept, man.


You can see our team entry here

http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=604458

All 3D from Nazarych and background matte painting and colors from me )

[Rockhoppermedia]

Thanks Alex,


had a look at your team entry, the planning and research has paid off and it looks awesome, thank you for sharing your teams vision

kind regards

rich

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