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man-to
03-07-2008, 06:27 AM
http://assets.cgsociety.org/nvart/1204874843/680bound
(http://assets.cgsociety.org/nvart/1204874843/1024bound)This one is continuation of my "Journey Begins" entry. In JB people were escaping Sequoia System because of fire. After many years families decided to return. They've planted new sequoias and built new houses. Almost all is the same - even the sun...

man-to
03-07-2008, 06:35 AM
Dunno if cropped is better - let me know please :)
Anyway, all work was done during 2 nights. Pity, but I won't finish it till 10th (gotta leave my country for week)...

http://www.pixelize.pl/mantraz/artspace/blaaa2.png
or
http://www.pixelize.pl/mantraz/artspace/blaaa3.png

sectora
03-07-2008, 10:59 AM
Hi Przemek,

I love your colors and general composition. Even if you don't finish before the end of the contest you have a great potential for this illustration and I think you should definitely take this further.

Try and either work out the foreground figure a bit more or leave it as is and make the structure in the midground more prominent.

Anyway... I really like the work so far!

Albert

man-to
03-07-2008, 01:01 PM
Albert: thanks for your advices. I'll try to finish it after the deadline.

Lyngby
03-07-2008, 07:52 PM
Really like your style. I`ll be glad to see you pulling it through. ;-)

Think i like the lowes crop best. The one with the opening to the left. Don`t crop the nice forground to hard. Maybe even give it a little more strenght.

cheers

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