first female character

[arpeggioator]

very nice model=)
but i think the breasts are "out of charcter"
they look strange...i cant explain what i think in english, but work more on it, but as i said, nice model:thumbsup:

[arpeggioator]

oh i forgot..
The head is awsome..love it:scream:

[leekhangwei]

thanks...
i have modeled this character quite some times ago,but i just have no time now, busy doing my assignment currenly.
Will have update as soon as possible

[FallenSwordsman]

looks good- I have to agree with the comment on the breasts though, they do seem to have been pushed together slightly...

[leekhangwei]

what kind of dressing do u guys think is suitable for her...any suggestion?? hehe..she is not going to walking down the street without any clothes on...

[FallenSwordsman]

Depends on whatever setting you're putting her in - also depends on the type of woman she is too - i.e. is she a professional in which case stick her in some kind of suit or is she just going to be casually dressed? You can start defining her character with clothing.

[leekhangwei]

thanks for the advise man...
Anyway i need to finish her entirely b4 adding clothes. I have only finished her upper body...still alot to be fixed...the chest part obviously.

[leekhangwei]

hai...haven got any update so far but this is the back view of her...
http://www.notdesign.net/~adom/khangwei/wip/girl_wip4.jpg



and another rotation test (http://www.notdesign.net/~adom/khangwei/wip/gal_rot.mov)

[Emberghost]

For the breasts it appears that you have made a sort of "perky" and "droopy" look to them. I think that the breasts are attached to the body a little to high up, imo

[Iysun]

good job for a first go, but the boobs need to be rotated outwards a bit in global y axis, they are pointing staight ahead and i think thats why they are looking kinda funny.

also the over all proportions are a bit off, but thats easy to fix:applause:

[leekhangwei]

you guys sure are familiar with boobs huh...hehe...ya the boob dudes

[UberMaximus]

Jus tone more BOOB comment....

Anatomically, you should be able to draw a 45 degree line from the centre of the two collar bones (middle of neck) down to the rib cage. The nipples (heh I just said nipples) should then lay on this line.....

I like the skin tone....

[Keith Young]

Nice work...

In addition to the breasts needing to be rotated out some, you might try to smooth out the transition to the arm-pit a bit as well (see image below)...

http://www.skinprops.com/images/b-pit.jpg

The armpit on yours looks too squared-off - it should rise up higher in the front than the back.

[Keith Young]

Yeah, yeah, another boob comment ;)...


I just figured out what else was bothering me about them. There's too much cleavage (never thought I'd say that!). I guess if she ends up in a push-up bra, then it will look correct ;).

[leekhangwei]

Hai Keith Young..thanks for the advise i really need that...i am not really a boobs guy hehe...sure need alot of reference...
by the way do you have the side view of the img u post it...so that i will have more to see and fix ....thanks

[Keith Young]

Well, it's a work-in-progress, but here's a side view (I'll try to post a larger one later on today - my machine is about to lock up on me ;) ).

http://www.skinprops.com/images/fb_wip2.jpg

[leekhangwei]

this is my side view of her...i used motion designer to make her boobs drop down abit so that i can fix it...hehe

http://www.notdesign.net/~adom/khangwei/wip/girl_wip5.JPG

[Keith Young]

Nice! :thumbsup: :buttrock:

The nipple itself may need to rotate out very slightly, but the overall shape looks very natural (according to my long-term memory ;) ).

[leekhangwei]

Finally i have got the time to fix her breast...still busy with my current project now...hope to get more update as soon as possible..

http://www.notdesign.net/~adom/khangwei/wip/gal_wip6.jpg
http://www.notdesign.net/~adom/khangwei/wip/gal_wip7.jpg

and here (http://www.notdesign.net/~adom/khangwei/wip/gal_rot2.mov) is the new rotation of her..

[leekhangwei]

what do you think guys.....i think it is ok for the time being...although more hardwork and time is needed...:)

[leekhangwei]

hai, i have fixed her shoulder part and did some minor changes of her breast.

this is another view of her...

http://www.notdesign.net/~adom/khangwei/wip/girl_wip8.JPG

close up of her
http://www.notdesign.net/~adom/khangwei/wip/girl_wip9.JPG
kinda look serious thou..

[leekhangwei]

Din have much time to make any progression these days....just some test renders...posting it soon...btw...do you guys know what is the best way to texture her eye...

[dominicqwek]

check out the joan of arc tut at 3dtotal.com. Theres a tut on eye texturing. This looks like its working out pretty nicely. :thumbsup:

[leekhangwei]

Finally i have finished my assignment and now i can focus on this project. Hope to have some updates soon. I like to ask you guys about how to achieve watery effect in the eye b4 i start texturing my character??? Do we add another layer of polys just for the watery effect???

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