Still image - Forgotten dungeon

[slaughters]

The walls look great. Great texturing and lighting. The composition of the image is off though. It looks like the center of focus should the the area where the corner of the wall is, but there is no central object or character to look at there.

The floor looks a little weird. More like melted, then hardened rock than mounds of dirt. Possibly try making the floor a little flatter and adding some scattered debris.

The skeleton on the right looks like it is in a strange pose. It's hard to tell if it is propped up against the wall, or stepping up from a deep hole. It's right foot also looks like it is embeded in one of the pillers.

[AXE]

thank you for the reply!

off course, the center of interest will be in the illuminated corner...it's still a w.i.p. , so it lacks of many things (and many important objects). Off course I'll add some debris on the floor.

Thank you very much for your help,

AXE

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