character - Woman Bot

[ceql]

Hey Strike!

koolies, I'm working on a female bot too :D

The head looks really good! :applause:
the body doesn't seem as well defined as the head... but good image overall ;)

[Dennik]

I love the face, (it reminds me of Wynona Ryder for some reason)
But i can't say the same for the cloth material. It looks like melted metal. Very strange. But again thats just me.
Great work overal :)

[sunjee]

~~~!:)

[boston]

hi .It`s a good art work
I love the face ,it looks really good!
But the bodymaterial seems Very strange

[tomb]

Great! She has a beautiful face. The cloth/material might look better smooth IMO.

[Hellwolve]

Although some replies imply that they dislike the cloth, I like it. It's strange. In a good way ;)

[proton]

Great work....keep showing us your stuff!

[kimson]

:applause: :<>

[Tony Richardson]

Nice work. I like the cloth as well. Very original and futuristic. I like the crease you did in the cloth between the breasts. Not enough people pay attention to this detail on a female model with large breasts.

My only critic would be, why is a robot drinking a glass of wine?

[Hellwolve]

Originally posted by Tony Richardson
Nice work. I like the cloth as well. Very original and futuristic. I like the crease you did in the cloth between the breasts. Not enough people pay attention to this detail on a female model with large breasts.

My only critic would be, why is a robot drinking a glass of wine?

Allow me to answer that. Ofcourse I'm not the creator, so I don't know for sure, but I think it's as follows:

It's an socialize robot. She exists to liven up party's and the likes, and she ofcourse needs to drink liquids to forfill that role ;)

[tinitus]

in my opinion she looks pretty nice but at the first moment I thought her body was made of stone so pherhaps you could improve or change the texture for her suite?!
but nice modeling and texture work for her face!

[rolhionjs]

hey, thanks all ! :)

Well, yea there's some discussions about this cloth... I just wanted it to me kinda specific metal, but soft as a tissue... missed :(

About the glass ! hehe ! Who said it's wine in it ? There's something very clear in this glass, and i just wanted to transpose human being drinking, having fun, to a bot, a almost human machine that drink something really lightening, something weird necessary for her to live. :) So Hellwolve yea that's exactly that ! :) And i can add there's just some steps for us to be bots... ok... I prefer to stop here :)

[Hellwolve]

Originally posted by .::STRIKE::.
<SNIP>So Hellwolve yea that's exactly that ! :) And i can add there's just some steps for us to be bots... ok... I prefer to stop here :)

Weeee! :bounce:

I knew it!


(heh, okay, enough sillyness for this post ;) )

[shoey]

As others have said, the head is great but the torso is bothering me too, not only the texture but the proportions are buggin me a bit but can't quite put my finger on why.

Great job again tho strike:thumbsup:

[Nikodemus]

looks really nice, however i think it could be just a bit better :) i dont want to be picky but i i get picky when i see potential... i think the picture is a bit static.. too rigid.. the uprightness of the figure is also emphasized with the perfectly vertical glass.... perhaps if you just tweaked a few things in the shoulders or neck.. or non glass holding arm, and also have the glass appear to have more of a physical presense with more weight and snug to the hand.. anyway .. carry on ! great modeling and lighting :wavey:

[Syrogen]

very cool strike! :thumbsup: could you give a link where i could find the lightshaders plugin? thanks :) keep up the awesome work!

[rolhionjs]

Ok, i note all your suggestions ! Thx shoey and Nikodemus

Syrogen : A great plugin here : http://www.lumenumbra.com/

created by Massimo Curatella

Buy it ! it's cheap and efficient ! (but i need to train again :) )

[rolhionjs]

Other angle, and testing another material for the cloth.

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/designpicture/femmetete002.jpg

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/designpicture/femmetete003.jpg

[hypercube]

Cool stuff..like the style and pose..you always create a nice atmosphere..I agree the 'glowing liquid' in the glass could be anything..or just carrying it to the fashionable :)

I kinda dig the blue outfit, more casual and sets her off from the background..though the other material made more sense for how the folds are, like it's a very heavy rubber or something.

Only crits would be she may be a tad burly in the shoulders (pads? very long biceps?)..from the other angle seemed like her trunk was too thick, but that's not a problem in the new shot..I liked seeing the side of her head and 'gear' more the other way though.

Aside from that she looks too similar to stu aitken's inside lw girl..it is a great face with striking features, but overexposed at this stage..some little tweaks to set her apart from her would be nice.

[BiTMAP]

her shoulders look wacky.

[pearson]

That face is very striking! (no pun intended!) It really is very well done. However, I agree that the shoulders need some work. Their large size, combined with the heavy bump on the first material made me think she was wearing some kind of thick foam outfit (like a wetsuit). But if that were true, then her collar bone wouldn't show through it, and it wouldn't stretch between her breasts like it does. :shrug:

Gorgeous face though...any chance of a 1600x1200 from the neck up? please! :bounce:

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