Flint-Gun

[JIII]

pretty sweet dude. its good to see a fellow C4Der in here.

hate to say it but the feather is the part i like the most.

[Rey]

Where are the cast shadows?
It looks like everything is floating.
The composition could use a little more work.
Everything is going in the same direction even the grain of the wood.(except the paper).
The elements in the scene look cool though.



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[RageCage]

looks awsome but somthing is not right about the shadows and i'm not a big fan of the paper texture but the pic is lookin cool!

[bgreg03]

ok i love it, but there are questions i have
do you think it would look better with just a little longer barrel?
and
is the feather a model from somewhere else or did u make it too?

[Emberghost]

Ya I am very interested in how you made that awsome looking feather as well.

[randyrives]

JIII - Thanks! Yeah the feather seems to be the big hit in the image.

Rey - Good eye the lighting really needs to be redone. I will jumble everything around a little more.


RageCage - Thanks! The more I look at the paper the less I like it also. But I don't know if I will change it at this point.
Time will tell.


bgreg03 - Thanks for the suggestion on the barrell. The feather was done by me. I have a Blue & Gold McCaw parrot, that I took a feather and scanned it. Made color, bump and alpha images and applied them to a plane. By the way the feather was one that was lost during a molt, I did not pluck it from the bird

:rolleyes:

[flingster]

can't see the image...whats happening...i'll try again...:bounce:

[flingster]

ok now i can.
sorry.
dirty it up a bit...wood texture looks plastic...other than that like it
nice work.
:wavey:

[flingster]

(i mean't wood on gun btw)
ooh and all looks like its floating for some reason...
check end of barrel sits on table.

[randyrives]

Ok sense I did not pay any attention to the lighting of my last attempt, here is an update with better lighting.

I also moved things around a little to try and get a better composition.

Let me know what ya'll think.
http://www.rrives.com/c4d8/FlintGun_Final_Web.jpg

[flingster]

cool.
needs relief carving on the stock...and smoother grain on dark wood part of flintlock...imho...but then what do i know!!:shrug:

nice work:thumbsup:

[Beavis]

I think its hard to pile the marbles like that?
otherwise you did a good job on the update... keep up

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