Ocarian's Poly Box

[Clanker]

héhé c'est du très bon boulot ça Guillaume. Pour ête juste un peu chiant, je pense qu'il y a un peu trop de subdivs sur le dos et la paume de la main. C'est marrant, avec le vertex color, on dirait presque qu'il y a du SSS ^^

[m1NDfReAK]

Je pense que les mains sont bon comme ça. Ils devraient être environ un tière de la polycount dans mon opinion. Peut-être un peu moins que ça, mais pas beaucoup.

J'aime les dessins.

m1ND

[ocarian]

Like m1NDfReAK said, is not necessary to optimize hands

and i Need some subdiv on fingers for animation :)


Vertex color is very powerful to make ambiance without ligth on object
is a good optimisation in engine to simulate ligthning
but you need to add some subdiv on model to create some shadow etc...
but it's very fun :thumbsup:
and yes it looks like SSS on the skin :D



thanks guys for the comments


if someone can't see
a little Render for you

http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/5263/vertexrenderbo7.jpg

[8bit_Mind]

i really enjoyed your character, looks like that cartoon games on ps2, great work !

[SmuggledPixel]

hey Ocarian, pretty good work ! it's clean and i like the cartoonish look of it. Great variations on the faces too.

[ocarian]

an old model make on 3Dsmax and photoshop

Inspiration (Blinx game :) )

http://ocarian1981.free.fr/IMGpagesite/galerie3D/lowpoly/3Dlow15.jpg

one map for head and one for Body


http://www.creajeux.fr/v2/etudiants/media/3911February2007_01.jpg

[guitarmunkee]

Your characters are awesome! Nice work. I love the different head types and textures!

I can't wait to see more.

[ocarian]

thanks for your comment guitarmunkee

An other work
a girl bust make on Maya (WIP)

first Concept

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/3985/girlsab5.jpg



Thanks to Chokmah (http://chokmah.cgsociety.org/gallery/) for his advises :thumbsup:

[vince22]

very nice, keep it up.

[Swizzle]

I think your cartoon guy and the cat came out very nicely, but this latest model needs some work.

While the concept does have a very well defined, straight jawline, it still appears quite feminine because of the overall curves and proportions, while the actual model looks a bit masculine because of the larger chin and overall facial structure.
When you want to make an attractive female, a cute baby or some sort of other character that's supposed to be cute and appealing, one of the things you should try to stay away from is hard lines except on places like the lips (and even then you have to be careful). I'd suggest flattening the bridge of the nose a little so you don't get those sharp shadows. She'll also look a bit more African that way because many African people have a slightly flatter bridge than most caucasians.
When you overlay the concept on top of your model, the only features that match are the eyebrows and everything around the face. The eyes, nose and mouth all need to be moved to look more like the concept.

I did a little paintover animation. I hope it's helpful:

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y29/xkostolny/afrogirl.gif

[ocarian]

thanks for you advices Swizzle :thumbsup:

I don't really want to make a realistic Girls just a model between cartoon and realistic
but it's true i need to make some modification on that mesh so I follow your advices but not really your screenshot ;)

I try to show the new sketch concept soon because the last is old (just for start model)

thanks again

[ocarian]

Ok :)

I made some modification on the her face
I think is better :)

http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/5006/facegirlue6.jpg

I try to work on the texture soon

See you :thumbsup:

[GenZ]

Your models are great.I was looking at your polyflow and i have to admit that its great and efficent.Textures are very good,kinda Squareenix-ish eheh. I dont think you will have problems getting a job with these,keep doing some more and send them in :)
Good luck.

[ocarian]

Thanks GenZ i appreciate your comment :thumbsup:

Yes I like the square-enix style (specially Kingdom hearts) and some other games like Behond good and evil (Ubi Soft) etc... good inspiration for me.

thanks to follow this thread :beer:

[GenZ]

great,you deserve it :) keep up the good work.

[ocarian]

hi all !

I working on an old model, a diving suit

the last version make on MAX and Photoshop

http://ocarian1981.free.fr/IMGpagesite/galerie3D/lowpoly/3Dlow07.jpg

for the exercice I Keep the 3D model with some modification on the mesh (add some vertex and edges)
and I make a new UVmapping and a new texture
the new UVmapping makes on MAYA

one picture of the new 3D Model

http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/7608/scaphandrenetpo9.jpg

I use two textures : Face (256*256) BOdy (256*512)

I try to show more on Texture soon :wip:

voilà :hmm:

[ocarian]

Hop !

first work on texture (WIP)

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/576/scaphandreng3.jpg

more soon :wip:

[mindrot]

These are looking really good ocarian.

~M~

[Hazardous]

great work in this thread Ocarian, look forward to seeing more!

[ocarian]

Thanks Mindrot and Hazardous :cool:
a new screen :)

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/5683/scaphandre02gc6.jpg

[berdal84]

Ca part bien ! Vive le métal ! vive le rap.... euh, je sort.

[Hoen]

Nice work my friend ;)

You've won a lot of xp :drool:

I'm waiting the final result :buttrock:

[Chokmah]

Hello friend:p

Good job indeed ^^

I hope to see the final result of this one .

Keep the great job :thumbsup:

[ocarian]

thanks! Berdal64 (in english please :p ), Hoen (MMMMHHH!) and Chokmah ( :beer: )

a little UP (from last week end)

http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/383/scaphandreeq6.jpg

the rest soon :thumbsup:

[ocarian]

New Update after a little break :D



http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/5886/scaphandrewipnd3.jpg

I try to make some Posing, a real time version and some little detail on texture :thumbsup:

See ya

[TryForce]

you dont know how much i like your work :) greatness :D

[Psyk0]

Super boulot, le style est vraiment beau et très bien réalisé.

[ocarian]

Thanks Tryforce and Psyk0 :bounce:

[ocarian]

Hi all !

A last Screen with this character
Posing with bones

http://ocarian1981.free.fr/IMGpagesite/galerie3D/lowpoly/3Dlow34.jpg


Real time version on this link (need Virtools player)

http://ocarian1981.free.fr/IMGpagesite/gallerievirtools/Scaphandre.htm

Lightning make with Vertex Color

Voilà :)

[blacker]

Pure gold man. That looks great!

[ThreeDViking]

Fantastic work! You have a great style, and you're consistent with it. :)

[ocarian]

thanks ThreeDViking and blacker for your comment :cool: ;)

[Meekon]

Loving the diving suit. Your texturing style is very nice :) Keep it up

[berdal84]

The lighting is darker, you could contrast your lighting adding a diffuse top light on your vertex color.
Very nice model, very nice pose !

(In english, mais voila l'english !)

[Havoc89]

Great stuff you got there! :thumbsup:

[ocarian]

little UP on this thread


two news model from personnal Level

First, Washing maching

texture : 512*256
Model :450 Triangles
Soft : Maya

http://ocarian1981.free.fr/IMGpagesite/galerie3D/lowpoly/3Dlow35.jpg


Second

a waggon

Texture : 512*256
Model : 454 Triangles
Soft : Maya

http://ocarian1981.free.fr/IMGpagesite/galerie3D/lowpoly/3Dlow36.jpg


voilà :)

[BakerCo]

at a slighly higher resolution this stuff would look great in Team Fortress 2.

excellent work!!

`Baker

[Hoen]

Hey! Oca :D Nice texturing :buttrock: yes it looks like pretty good for Team Fortress 2

Sorry, i'd missed the final scaphandre and virtools viewing :p Great work on it. It can make a good character for a cartoon bioshock ;) or a new class on TF2 :p

[kromano]

Your work looks fantastic, your textures are crisp and clear, the detail really stands out. I don't know how some artists can make such low resolution texture work so sharp and awesome. What's your secret?

[ocarian]

Thank Hoen and BakerCo :D

Kromano, there is no secret, just work :p
I worked on PS2 Game, so is a good training because You need to optimise your maps and model. (256 pixel max on this support )
My last (and first job) was a collaboration with a Frensh Studio.
On this studio there are a lot of excelent texturer so you must work to win a lot quality on texture. Good experience but I need more work :)


Some level's Screen (WIP) (Max Viewport)

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/2049/lav01en2.jpg


http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/4721/lav02ue2.jpg


Lightning make with Vertex Color
Voilà

[BakerCo]

thats really nice lovin the look.

`Baker

[ocarian]

Hi all

I Working on a new character, a Pirate Girl.


This week end, I ll make some change on the face mesh. The Hair cut for exemple.

First step on texture.

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/1928/culottedetailtg1.jpg

http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/3268/fifillewx6.jpg

The face, First version.

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/8388/facegirljl1.jpg


I try to show some concept sketch soon :)

[nesnerosx]

Very nice work you have! It is an inspiration to guys like me who are new to the 3D world ^^

[BakerCo]

looking great keep it coming.

glad to see your thread is not dead.

[ocarian]

Thanks nesnerosx and BakerCo
I appreciate your Reply

Don't worry BackerCo I'm Alive :D .
But I have a lot of work, we need to finish Some professionnal project.
I hope to show you some stuff soon ;)


A little sketch

http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/5315/atrworkgirlfg7.jpg

voilà

[NeptuneImaging]

These models are all kick ass dude...I especially love the last model on the bottom with the female pirate... I still need to learn how to model human hands properly... rock on...

[WHW]

I had a pleasant chuckle when I saw the running pose for the diver. He's great!

I like the look of the props too, that washing machine has a Day of the Tentacle feel about it. Brilliant.

Looking forward to see the woman finished, there's already some great detail going into the texture and the modeling is shaping up nicely.

[chewedon]

Love your work !

Simple and clean :D

[RasmusDeguchi]

Loving the style of your work, keep it up!

[ocarian]

Thanks for your reply all :blush:

I'll try to show some news soon

Thanks again

[ocarian]

Hi! all

A little Up this week end

I made some changes on the mesh
You can see the complet Model on this link

http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/9941/modelcomplet.jpg

and texture Screen

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/2967/gilet.jpg


Voilà

[giyomu]

oh je me rapellais plsu de ce post :(, c toujours aussi bon , bon style , chouette palette de couleur , bref j'adhere totalement :thumbsup:

really nice , I am a bug fan of your character ;)

[biano3d]

realy great work man, nice topology and clean textures, i love your style...

[Bloodrain]

Very nice texturing! I especially like the clothing on that latest character. Just look out when mirroring highlights and shadows though, they can be very distracting when they're pointing in all kinds of directions.

Keep going :)

[ocarian]

HI all :)

Thanks for your reply Bloodrain, giyomu and biano3d

Some new screen.

Character Map 1024*512
Hair map 256*256
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/7077/piratewip02.jpg


http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/9317/piratewip01.jpg

I ll make some posing soon and i probably add some Accessory.

[blacker]

Looking good Ocarian!

Is texturing done? I see I few things which throw it off just a bit. The shading under her breasts is really strong. When you look the shading on her arms under the cuffs isn't as strong, nor is the shading on her legs. Seems like it needs to be adusted a little. Also, the shading on her belly button seems a little weird. Lastly, her face seems to need the.. laugh lines extending from the nose. I think they're called nasolabial lines. Something to punch up her cheeks a little bit more and add some depth.

Like, I said, it looks great even without the above changes. Just some food for thought. :)

[ocarian]

Interesting reply blacker.

I agree with Arms, legs and belly. I ll make some changes this week end :)
I think the face stay like this.

Thanks for your advices. :thumbsup: