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traumfusion
03-03-2008, 06:30 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/313349/313349_1204529438_medium.jpg

Title: Getaway
Name: Wilhelm Behr
Country: Germany
Software: Photoshop

Hi There and a great March Morning !!



Got finished my new Artwork ! called Getaway

It is fully made in Photoshop without any Photomaterials...It was really hard but nice working flow..

It shows an refuge Woman .. hiding..
Stock still and hopeing not to be detected by those robot pobe heads...

If you have suggestions just point them out !!

Best regards



William
TMArtist
03-03-2008, 02:48 PM
Hi Wilhelm,

I really like your composition and color scheme for this one. Very nice painting. For constructive criticism I suggest re-examinging the girl's pose. She looks like she's stalking something instead of trying to "hide". Perhaps also change her expression to one of fear or apprehension would help too. The way you've rendered the hair makes it look like her head is in movement; perhaps solidfy the brush edges around her hair.

In general, I really like the concept and the brush strokes you used have a beautiful painterly quality to them. The foundation of the painting is strong, you just need to fix a few things on the girl and you will have an excellent piece.

Best regards,
SeifoSid
03-05-2008, 03:52 AM
the top part is nice, the lower half of the piece needs some work, has potential to improve.
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