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FaNuM
05-04-2003, 05:08 PM
Hey all,
this is the first decent animation project I did. It's a fanta commercial created as a school assignment.
I know the sound aint too great but i didnt have someone around that could fix it so i did it myself.

http://www.vi2.com/getFile/150148.jpg

the animation can be found here:

http://home.1asphost.com/series60/final_sound.txt
(divx 5.0.5, 3.6 Mb)
FaNuM
05-04-2003, 05:44 PM
btw, crits are welcome! :wip:
rejekt
05-04-2003, 05:48 PM
one quesiton, why is the file in .txt format if it is a vid?
R.L.M
05-04-2003, 06:12 PM
cooooooollllllll!!!!!!!!
it's going to be at TV one day?
very cool... i love it..hehe(brave ant!)

btw, i gess it's a txt because the server is't allow a AVI files..
am i right?
FaNuM
05-04-2003, 08:38 PM
glad to hear you like it! no it wont be on tv since this is just for a school assignment. I hope i will make it to tv work some day.. :)

.avi isnt allowed on the host so it is renamed to .txt
LordShaitan
05-04-2003, 11:26 PM
Well... where to start?

Well the sound is horrible, it has alot of static in it.

The ant's texture is very boring, and i dont remember seeing on that is completely black like that before. Most have tiny hairs on them.

Also, the shadows are messed up, i dont know where you were going with the bottom of the can, because when the ant lifts it up there is a light under it, which isnt correct. as well as when he tries to pull himself up there is no reflection of the ant on the can.

Also there are some aliasing problems with the texture on the can. Also, keep in mind that commercials are 30 seconds or less, there are many parts you can cut out because of time, and because they dont advance the plot.

Dont take offense, this is just a crit. Looks good but it doesnt look profesional just yet.
FaNuM
05-04-2003, 11:35 PM
executioner eh? ;) Hey im posting here to get crits so its ok to do so! The light spot under the can may be caustics
ansiaaa
05-08-2003, 03:31 PM
it made me thirsty!
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