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designfish
05-04-2003, 05:18 PM
My packagingdesign schoolwork, please comment

designfish
05-04-2003, 05:21 PM
[B]My packagingdesign schoolwork, please comment

designfish
05-04-2003, 05:26 PM
My packagingdesign schoolwork, please comment

koinu
05-04-2003, 06:23 PM
Very clean designs you have there, What is the product that they are for?? Being a graphic designer, I love to see interesting designs. Although it would e nice to know a little more as to what you are trying to "sell". All I can think of is that it might be for some green tea..:bounce:

CGmonkey
05-04-2003, 08:02 PM
Alot chineese feeling into it.. Great work !

designfish
05-04-2003, 08:07 PM
Thank you!

rikrog
05-04-2003, 10:42 PM
very nice, clean style. good colour choice

in my line of work the client always wants to 'fill' the blank spaces. always a stuggle with them pesky clients.

are they labels or box tops?
one thing, the first pics ilustration looks a little unfinished (like it needs some more colour)

KotsVlok
05-04-2003, 10:48 PM
Yes yes, nice clean work!
I love chinese stylish work :thumbsup:

rikrog
05-04-2003, 11:19 PM
the first pic again: where the illy cuts in to the blue looks a bit out of line

i recon the first two designs are far stronger than the third;
the pattern though lovley, repeats to many times for my liking. and the stagered copy looks out of place on such a formal design. but keep the red band overlay to one side, i like that.

perhaps if you do a new illustration for the centre and set the copy in a straight column?

hope im not being to critacal

technogirl28
05-05-2003, 02:09 AM
Very cool. Very strong ethnic feeling to it.

Ian Jones
05-05-2003, 02:56 AM
Nice, very intricate stuff... but I hope you don't usually present your work with such heavy jpg compression.

koinu
05-05-2003, 04:00 PM
DesignFish,
Hey just went ot your website and to my dismay it's in a language that I can't read, is there a "english" version to it??
I must agree with rikrog about the thrid pic being odd. Yes the staggered text seems way out of place for an asian design, no rhyme no reason issue. Still wanting to know what the designs are for, product or just for design... Very Nice Work:bounce:

designfish
05-05-2003, 04:40 PM
http://www.rjsydesign.com/bbs

welcome to my webside,though there isn't english version now,graphic language is

international.you can know chinese design and chinese culture.i hope to be friend with you!

koinu
05-05-2003, 08:25 PM
The only problem with your site is that I don't have software that lends in me reading your stuff. You are so right that design is international.

christianHxC
05-20-2003, 12:07 AM
I'm not oriental .. but all that chinese , japanese, and other oriental styles are nice... I would like to learn more about that. someday soon I'll PM you =) :thumbsup:

designfish
05-28-2003, 04:53 PM
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Goatfuzz
05-29-2003, 04:08 AM
Those are great designs designfish! :beer:
-I personally like the first one the most. I think it's the colors in the first one that were easier on my eyes.

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