lowpoly crafts

[Spex84]

Looks good! I think I see a seam on the tire tread that should probably be fixed, because it's really obvious.

The truck gets somewhat lost in the dark background--perhaps a lighter background would display the truck better.

[luCiFEAR]

oh damt >_<
Spex84> haven't noticed that seam on tire! thnx I'll fix that ;) amhh and about dark background, someone else have already told me that, but I noticed that it is usually problem of monitor calibration. try to check this site:
http://www.displaycalibration.com/
you should see clearly all tones between black and white if not there some problems with display settings

[Onward]

Good work!

The textures are nice although I agree about the seam.

Im not so keen on the texture you have for the headlight, I think it's too saturated but thats only my opinion. If I was to suggest anything about the model it would be to make it slightly less uniform, the platform on top would be mostly uniform and flat but maybe a few subtle distortions due to weight/length of use would add authenticity to the work.

Still, these are minor tweaks and in the end it's all down to preference.

[luCiFEAR]

hey friends!
long time since i posted here so couple more vehicles.
for this time I made simple 360rotation animation for you to check models topology from all angles. you can check it by pressing following link:
RrrrrrRRRoootaaaatttiooooon (http://www.lukasluk.com/Stuff/360.mov) (its about 4mb, quility isn't very good :) )

http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/6221/2000ev6.jpg

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