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methodz
02-28-2008, 12:32 AM
hey guys this is a short animation i made for a friend this past holiday.

-This is my first character animation. ever. i did all the stages my self
storyboarding, modeling, rigging, animating, editing.

-Total work time was about 3 weeks.
-Rendering is only 13 seconds/frame, about 4000 frames total.
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ALL Critique and comments welcome :)
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From The Heart(Animation) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rzFlq7lSWhk)

Storyboard(1-3) (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v731/sykmethodz/storyboards1-2.jpg)
Storyboard(2-3) (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v731/sykmethodz/storyboards3-4.jpg)
Storyboard(3-3) (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v731/sykmethodz/storyboards5-6.jpg)
Phredrek
02-28-2008, 03:52 PM
Smooth out your camera moves.
The character pops when he gets up from the bench and when henads off the heart flower thing to the girl.
Very floaty animation, add more weight

good design idea with the hearts floating around, but i'd change it to flowers maybe, too many hearts at once. kind of confusing that the characters are hearts and so are the flowers. I dunno.
methodz
03-02-2008, 05:28 AM
thx for the critz i'll work on it i think i may work on the animations a bit and i wanna try a new shader i was testing out when i was making it heres quick shot of a shader i'm playin with.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v731/sykmethodz/heart_cellshade3.jpg
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