Vehicle/Enviroment: Audi RS4 in Italy

[Man]

looks like verything's texture,no modeling.......the windshield for example...you should work on that!!!and there's somethin really strange about the gold light coming from the door,it iluminates the car but it doesn't iluminate tre door

[nek11man]

good job
the proportion of your rs4 looks a bit off, the height of the upper body and the lower body, especially the front wind sheild, seems a bit too long

[Soljarag]

the car is pretty good, but the env. is awsome :thumbsup: good work

[KrYpT0]

:D some wicked alloys u got on that thing lol :D looks like sumthin id get for my jetta. oh and the lighting from the door is odd also check your modeling a little lol the car is too "clean"

[gmask]

I'm noticing some vertical lines in the render especially in the surface of the car..maybe they are from the shadow maps?

[chronus377]

I noticed the shadow maps too. Should I increase the resolution for the Dmap size? Its already at around 2000, i think. I'll probably tweak some stuff now that I have time, like the rims are too dark, and a few other things you guys mentioned.

nek11man: you got a good eye. The image I uploaded was resized a bit in photoshop, I think I had something wrong with my camera's settings when I rendered and it seemed a bit streched vertically. Maybe I over corrected a little.


thanks for the comments.

[nek11man]

yeah, there s still a lot of things to fix to make this perfect, but still are very good job, really

mayb u can try to model the headlight, it'll give a bit of death and detail, will b much more intersting to look at

still i like it

:thumbsup:


Ken
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[atomic-za]

Nice, I like it :drool:

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