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SergeAstahov
05-03-2003, 12:11 AM
Howdy partners!

This is my first fictional character. I named him Loopy, his about..., just kidding :D, and want to use him in animation for learning purposes. Well, as for me he's finished, but maybe i missed something - so C&C are welcome.

Hawk!

SergeAstahov
05-03-2003, 12:16 AM
Another one...

SergeAstahov
05-03-2003, 12:17 AM
And another one.

SergeAstahov
05-03-2003, 02:14 PM
Don't u have anything to say ?! :(

SergeAstahov
05-04-2003, 12:44 PM
I see, i have tons of answers, but still, some updates:

http://hawk3d.times.lv/index_files/image002.jpg

http://hawk3d.times.lv/index_files/image004.jpg

http://hawk3d.times.lv/index_files/image006.jpg

bigB
05-04-2003, 12:55 PM
looks nice but needs some work....the face needs a loth more personality.
the arms and hands seems a bit flat....
the legs needs some detail....now it's a cilinder.


work on detail...you have the start...:)

RKanyama
05-04-2003, 04:34 PM
I would add more detail in the sholder area. Looks like it may give you problems when it's animation time.

:wavey:

SergeAstahov
05-04-2003, 11:01 PM
bigB thanks for response, made some changes. Arms i hope are not flat anymore and as for the legs i want them to be as simple as they are now ;).

RKanyama what do u mean by adding more details in the
shoulder area, coz there are enough segments for animation.

And now the updates:

http://hawk3d.times.lv/index_files/loopy4.jpg

http://hawk3d.times.lv/index_files/loopy5.jpg

http://hawk3d.times.lv/index_files/loopy6.jpg

Brucie Rosch
05-04-2003, 11:24 PM
I like him -- he seems sort of frog-like, like he's a bug-eater (with a whippy-snappy tongue, of course).

You might want to come up with another ear shape, 'cause I think they should be bigger. For a cute character, I think you'd want ears that would really show movement and expression and the small ones you've got don't give you much to work with. But if you enlarge these, you might be getting too Shrek-like, maybe?

Find ways to give him expression! Is he a smart ass? or innocent and sweet? or sad? a brat? You'll have to get asymmetrical at some point, too.

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