Conference room of NIOC!, AmiratA Gorji (3D)

[Bubbaloo]

It looks to me like the bottom is cropped off to much. The render is 50% ceiling. Nice quality render still.

[Rogee]

I agree with the above, feels cropped too much.

What if you lowered the camera, so you see just the tip/top of the chairs in front of the camera. This way you'll have a well defined foreground element, and also frame the shot with the backs of the FG chairs.

Or shift the camera to the left, with chairs framing on the right.

-Great texture on the chairs
-Great lighting

[stevesideas]

Good lighting. I agree that the crop is quite tight, would be nice to see more of the room for sure.
I think the reason people are commenting on the crop is because the balancing of the image is not true. Too much ceiling and not enough floor or lower areas.

[Greenvolume]

Quite neat render. how did you do the hose lights behind the curved part of the ceiling?

[AAGorji]

thanks for your comment steveio,
Amirali I used vray light material for hose lights , not linear lights!
you can assign light material to any object form!

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