Animation: flying ships...

[j00st81]

woah, very sweet

I could only watch it once for some odd reason, after that the image got all screwy n stuff :(

(yeah I got the latest divx)

;)

[future14]

hey man, nice piece of work, it looks dramatic for me, wat 3d application u used to develope it?


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[JasonChoi]

:)
Nice meet you guy!.
I just used it in lightwave 3d and Cyborg 5D monster [ rain ]
The under smoke and clouds is Hyper voxel.

upper clouds is turblence texture of environmental shader.
and then other stuff is mixed compositing each other layer in
combustion* [ making a layer> Null point > traking a layer >
add glow, rain, colour correcting ]

about 250 frame / rendering time of Hyper voxel : 48 Hour [low anti-aliasing ]

Thank you.

[stephen2002]

That is quite impressive. The jet trails are quite nice, the jets are textured well. The backdrops are good and the clouds are also pretty good.

One thing that I noticed is that the aircraft casts a very large shadow on the city to the right, making the city look tiny in compairson to the aircraft. The lightning effect is a bit too rapid, too many flashes. Other than that this is an excellent piece of work.

[tinitus]

aWesome

[future14]

Originally posted by knightoflord
:)
Nice meet you guy!.
I just used it in lightwave 3d and Cyborg 5D monster [ rain ]
The under smoke and clouds is Hyper voxel.

upper clouds is turblence texture of environmental shader.
and then other stuff is mixed compositing each other layer in
combustion* [ making a layer> Null point > traking a layer >
add glow, rain, colour correcting ]

about 250 frame / rendering time of Hyper voxel : 48 Hour [low anti-aliasing ]

Thank you.

i see, good choice of programs huh:applause:

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[Dave Black]

Really nice overall.

The actual ship animation could use some work. They don't seem to have a sense of weight for their seemingly large size.

Also, the enviromental effects, mostly the clouds in the foreground seem to be "puffing" over and over. It's a beit distracting.

I'd also say that the cities could use some more detail, and perhaps smaller craft flying about. And as mentioned before, the shadows and sense of size and depth are really off.

All in all, it's a fantastic piece, worthy of praise. If you have tha ablility, i'd make some changes to take it that last %10 to greatness.

-3DZ

:D

[ragecgi]

I'd have to agree with Zealot.

GREAT work.

Just needs some ironing out is all:)

[future14]

Originally posted by 3DZealot
Really nice overall.

The actual ship animation could use some work. They don't seem to have a sense of weight for their seemingly large size.

Also, the enviromental effects, mostly the clouds in the foreground seem to be "puffing" over and over. It's a beit distracting.

I'd also say that the cities could use some more detail, and perhaps smaller craft flying about. And as mentioned before, the shadows and sense of size and depth are really off.

All in all, it's a fantastic piece, worthy of praise. If you have tha ablility, i'd make some changes to take it that last %10 to greatness.

-3DZ

:D


mayb wat 3DZealot said is true, that can actually enhance the work.... to a better stage..pls keep on man, waiting for ur next posting man:bounce: :bounce: :bounce:



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[ansiaaa]

wow! cool animation!

[jussing]

Awesome!! :thumbsup:

Along the lines of what Zealot said, I think the 2nd ship turns too fast. And maybe it should - what do you call it anyway - "tilt" some more to the left, so it looks like it's using the rudders on the wings to make that dramatic turn, and not just the tail fin.

Still, kick-ass. I love the finished "look" of it... you know, colors, layers, compositing, glows, etc...

Cheers,
- Jonas

[Garma]

Image looked good... the animation incredible:applause:

[JasonChoi]

Thank you for everyone reply.

J.S

[Solesurvivor]

wow, this was awesome, i'd love to see more where that came from !! :thumbsup:

[JasonChoi]

:)

Thank you.
If you mind I'm able to show you more the animation.

http://reboom.hihome.com
Divx or wmv.

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