<< Gallops —— LEOPARD. >>, Shibo XIAO (3D)

[xiaoclement]

This is my first job posted on CGtalk, I hope that everybody who has seen this picture give me the proposition to improuve it.
Thanks to everyone.:)

[xiaoclement]

just a test

[azynkron]

This picture is so coooool!!

visit my showreel on http://wildcatfc.free.fr/
:)

2D/3D animator

Did you intentionally try to get some attention?

Allthough I can see the potential, there are some flaws.

1. The pattern on the gepard is repeated. It's pretty obvious actually.
To me the animal looks like an export from Poser.
2. I find the image confined. I can see that you have the 1/3 rule applied, but
perhaps you should try to have 2/3 of the picture showing the environment.
It squeezes the animals between the sand and the top of the picture.

2*

Might have given you 3 if you didn't post that remark..

[xiaoclement]

the first time i post the image on CGtalk, i am happy for receving you message, they are very useful, i want to know more about you, if it's possible. (the remark is not written by me, just a error, because i haven't logged out after the last visit)

you have raison, i make the posing and modeling of the leopard and ennironnement in maya. and the blur and the effects of dust are done in PS. i don t feel it s very very good, because, i am improuving the technique for using the maya.

and then, how do you feel about the idea, the inital intention is to do a publicity for macbook, and the leopards running to mean the progression of new technologie devolloped quickly and irrisitible without border on the desert.

i might add just a logo of Apple at middle_low of picture.

waiting the responce...
thanks...:)

[xiaoclement]

comment utiliser ce forum?

[xiaoclement]

Did you intentionally try to get some attention?

Allthough I can see the potential, there are some flaws.

1. The pattern on the gepard is repeated. It's pretty obvious actually.
To me the animal looks like an export from Poser.
2. I find the image confined. I can see that you have the 1/3 rule applied, but
perhaps you should try to have 2/3 of the picture showing the environment.
It squeezes the animals between the sand and the top of the picture.

2*

Might have given you 3 if you didn't post that remark..

thank you very much!!!
the first time i post the image on CGtalk, i am happy for receving you message, they are very useful, i want to know more about you, if it's possible. (the remark is not written by me, just a error, because i haven't logged out after the last visit)

you have raison, i make the posing and modeling of the leopard and ennironnement in maya. and the blur and the effects of dust are done in PS. i don t feel it s very very good, because, i am improuving the technique for using the maya.

and then, how do you feel about the idea, the inital intention is to do a publicity for macbook, and the leopards running to mean the progression of new technologie devolloped quickly and irrisitible without border on the desert.

i might add just a logo of Apple at middle_low of picture.

waiting the responce...
thanks...:)

[CoB90]

are you ok?

nice image, 2*
for me the animals are too far away...

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