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SZart
02-20-2008, 09:31 AM
Hi,
here's my official thread for Dominance War III!
I decided to join CGC team for my first Dominance War.

CHARACTER | Inquisitor Golain

Race: Human - male
Class: Stalker
Artifact weapon: Innocence judges- Darkness/void


...a quietly pule...he gnases one's teeth in anger when he lookes down on to that pure creature...
a mild voice comes up..."Have mercy upon him, please...."
with profound aversion" I will, I will..." and his sword releases the soul of the creatures body ...
Of course she influences the inquisitor...he's not her slave but he follows her instructions in a special way...she is responsible for his clean conscience...indeed she innocent and just wants some more grace of charity and mercy even though she get raped and abstracted her eyesight in the past...now a small girl on the soulders of his protector full of sadness about the cruelness in this world...
He loves her like a daughter but has got everytime a diverse of interpretation, because he's full of anger and aversion ...when she tells him to dispence mercy...he's convinced it would be mercy to unleash the soul of his enemy body...
hes something like a fallen hieratic warrior....following his enemies over weeks through outbacks and deserted cities until he's able to execute them...

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http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/1103/inquisitorpre3oq2.jpg
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i thought i should update also on the first side...

Ps.: Sry for my disgusting English :/ !

SZart
02-21-2008, 09:22 AM
http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/4382/secundthumbck0.jpg

Secund thumb...

I think i will start soon with 3D, cause my 2D skills are not that evulated...

i plan to start with the small girl first...finally she will be blind...
i will create her in a relaxed pose and later i will pose her on his shoulder, so she could
he can perceive her wihsper of innocence...so he can construe it in his mind...
dunno what weapon will give him...sword/maul/axe or scepter...we will see...

SZart
02-23-2008, 05:40 PM
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/2163/inquisitorheadpre1gn4.jpg

I already started with the head for the Inquisitor...here an first impression...
i will go on with a dummy character with corresponding anatomy...soon more...

some feedback would be nice...;D

BeeFGee
02-25-2008, 01:29 AM
I like the idea with that little girl ;) ...

will she be able to do something? I mean, does she have any influence to the inquisitor?


i persuit this :) ...

CharlesVarenne
02-25-2008, 10:04 AM
It looks really weird on the neck area. Also I think there is a lack of strong personnality. I mean it looks a bit like everybody type of tough guy. I would do more research on finding nice feature face. Otherwise your modelling looks nice. Keep it up :)

SZart
02-25-2008, 12:47 PM
Oh thank u guys!

Of course she influences the inquisitor...he's not her slave but he follows her instructions in a special way...she is responsible for his clean conscience...indeed she innocent and just wants some more grace of charity and mercy even though she get raped and abstracted her eyesight in the past...now a small girl on the soulders of his protector full of sadness about the cruelness in this world...
He loves her like a daughter but has got everytime a diverse of interpretation, because he's full of anger and aversion ...when she tells him to dispence mercy...he's convinced it would be mercy to unleash the soul of his enemy body...
hes something like a fallen hieratic warrior....following his enemies over weeks through outbacks and deserted cities until he's able to execute them...


Think u're right... there is a lack of strong personnality...i will try to change this soon...may be a little bit to much contur at the neck area...will look if i fix it...otherwise u won't see much of this area later...but u are right...thanks for the explicit feedback!

I think i will post soon new progress picture...

SZart
02-28-2008, 10:16 AM
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/751/inquisitorheadpre3vds4.jpg

hey...
just a small new update of my work...don't worry didnt worked at the new parts in zbrush until now...further on I think i will revise the hair of the angels...and i will add a jesus cross in the middle of them ...

Silpher
02-29-2008, 10:33 AM
Yo Szart Nice update, The guy reminds me a bit of someone from warhammer 40k ;)

I like the head it looks convincing but still has to much a flair of kindness, maybe because he uses darkness/void he could looks more wicked, put some scars on him make his facial features more pronounced It'll also gives a better contrast between the tiny innocent girl and him. I think the armor and especially the the small angel dont look consistent. The different armor plates in front of his neck seem to be there without any real purpose and the angels are just glued on his breastplate, looks like I could just rip them of if I wanted to. It would be nicer if you intergrated them more in the armor. Also you told me how hard it was to make them still there could be a lot more improved concerning the angels I looked up some baroque angels and actually they look more like 3 years olds instead of baby's
Pic (http://www.walking-in-germany.co.uk/images/angels.jpg) Pic2 (http://www.navigo.com/wm/paint/auth/rubens/christ.jpg)

before going on It would be nice to see more consistency.
Keep up the good work!

SZart
03-01-2008, 01:23 PM
yes of course with the head u're right...i already know...when i got time to, i will change it...i hope soon;)...yeah the angels some more integration...at the moment i am researching heraldic ornaments and looking for barock and rockoko elements ...i think this will solve the problem...what i want to create are called puttos and i think after sculpture they will look like these...
but thanks for feedback!

SZart
03-15-2008, 10:01 PM
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/5861/inquisitorpre1lbi7.jpg

I think the arms could get some more volume...specially at the bizep area...and i think i will enlarge the hand also a bit......after that i will add some more detail ornaments and will start in zbrush sculping...
i am a little bit afraid to break the budget with the little girl...mhh have to think about...

blindsyte
03-15-2008, 10:20 PM
way cool stuff! :D

funkydog
03-15-2008, 10:45 PM
Wow!!! This is so amazing about the details as a baby model and the carving things, it's look so delicate and beautiful! but I please to recommend about the figure that maybe too slim not looks like a man who can move along the battle, though :)

SZart
03-16-2008, 11:09 AM
oh thanks a lot!...But do u really think he is too slim?...he got a 9er kanon and his shoulder length is anatomic correct...just the arms i want to change a bit...i think they are a little bit to slim...could u specify the region of disbelieve

SZart
03-16-2008, 06:53 PM
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/6387/inquisitorpre2xx0.jpg

added some more ornaments...didn't fixed the arms until now..mhpf...so far for today...

SZart
03-21-2008, 03:27 PM
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/1103/inquisitorpre3oq2.jpg

update :D ...got some problems withe the tiny lady...the reason for missing...easily for right proportion between him and her...his shoulder length ist to small...i'm thinking about to put her on his left side...so he can hold her hand...but i dunno...i will see

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