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superpauloitalo
02-20-2008, 12:30 AM
- LAST UPDATE:

Well... I didn't get in time to finished Tebra, so I'll keep working on it in my spare time.
Take a look at the actual stage:

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3191/2434946816_18c4d69465_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2033/2434128521_8a2d73d053_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2370/2434945894_a8aa8b7990_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2370/2434946504_7d28e24067_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2014/2434127479_1a0f3d4ff6_o.jpg

Thank you very much for all the comments, guys.
See ya!


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Hi, I'm yet looking for a good design for my ultimate weapon. There is some sketches:

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2279/2278557212_7cd2ce445f_o.jpg

I'll keep doing more sketches to reach something more like "Ultimate."

Good luck to all.
See ya.

grassetti
02-20-2008, 12:42 AM
Hey dude! nice to see you here.

Muito bom os sketches, curti muito! Best luck!


Cya!

oliveira
02-20-2008, 02:59 AM
great concepts Paulo!
cool ideas!

Alex Oliver

Buckminster076
02-20-2008, 05:09 AM
Fun designs and nice line work. Makes me want to draw!
I'm liking the two guys at the top.
Cheers.
-I.

SebastianPatric
02-20-2008, 05:42 AM
Sexy artwork. I like the top right.

Nihilicon
02-20-2008, 06:16 AM
Awesome concepts, great to see something different at last.

heavyness
02-20-2008, 06:42 AM
Sexy artwork. I like the top right.

yeah, i'm digging the top right concept too. not so much the head, but the body shape is really cool and i like the weapon he has.

but they are all really cool designs.

scarredhands
02-20-2008, 06:46 AM
I'm liking the concept in the bottom left corner, looks very indiginous. Can't wait to see what comes from these. Nice job!

kobi
02-20-2008, 07:27 AM
Very nice concept the style is very refreshing

DiegoMaia
02-20-2008, 03:45 PM
I love all the ideas... these are the best so far!!
Looking foward to see the 3d models!!

dmonk
02-20-2008, 04:04 PM
I like the top left character and the bottom right weapon.

NoirQ
02-20-2008, 04:41 PM
loving the characters, all of them, bottom left is my favourite though, very expressive :)

inneractive
02-20-2008, 06:09 PM
I like your style! The top right and bottom center guys looks most interesting to me.

StuntMan
02-20-2008, 06:45 PM
Hey fascinating, very Hellboy-ish designs. I love them, good luck :)

Matellis
02-20-2008, 07:11 PM
Monkey man is my fav! I just love it

Pegorari
02-20-2008, 08:01 PM
Very good your concepts !
Im waiting to see your model!

veteehrri
02-20-2008, 09:32 PM
Awesome concepts, great ideias. loved the top right and botton center concepts.
Keep it up!

OKMER
02-20-2008, 10:22 PM
Yap I second all that!Nice original Ideas and great sketches!Happy war man!

superpauloitalo
02-21-2008, 03:02 AM
Thank you, guys, your comments helped me to choose the concept to work on.
I've made some head sketches:

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2363/2277766619_83ece56aab_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2010/2280203059_89209e6868_o.jpg

samize
02-21-2008, 10:50 PM
You go girl! :scream:

Oh, and head number 1 is my favorite.

jocz
02-21-2008, 10:59 PM
Maybe 3 with horns from the 4 or 1 ?

oliveira
02-21-2008, 11:03 PM
great update! the number one looks great to me!

Alex Oliver

srb1977az
02-21-2008, 11:04 PM
cool stuff, ..I really like head concept 1.

Xarxys
02-21-2008, 11:16 PM
Love the concepts very very nice linework, I love the first head concept also.

OKMER
02-21-2008, 11:17 PM
1,2 & 4 looks quit simular.
Prefere these ones,with alittle weak for N4.
Like his chin!

:beer:

DiegoMaia
02-22-2008, 12:30 AM
That's gonna be awsome!

heavyness
02-22-2008, 12:52 AM
i like number 1... kinda has the same shape as his weapon.

CoNSeptiC
02-22-2008, 09:44 AM
Thats somne pretty awesome concepting dude, I'm liking head #4, has more personality than #1, #5 also looks cools, very evil!

Are you going for the 2d or 3d event?

SashaP
02-23-2008, 10:15 AM
I adore your number 1 design, and I love the body type/style you gave him! Can't wait to see the finished model!

superpauloitalo
02-23-2008, 11:52 PM
Hi! I was tempted to swap my threads, that insectoid character, Waspen, would be a good choice too... but I thought and thought and Waspen will continue being my 2d thread.

Tebra is a friend's old RPG character and I was the dungeon master of his D&D campaing, so I have more knowledge of Tebra than Waspen and, since my 3d thread is my main thread, I will continue working on this character.

Name: Tebra.
Class: Warlord.
Race: Cursed Human.
Artifact: Wind Star - air/lightning.

Tebra was a leader who drove his brave people to a terrible battle against Zarack, a powerful invoker. Only Tebra survived. Zarack cursed him for his inconsequet act. Tebra was turned into a monster to never lead any army again. So Tebra decided to be his own army and fight to honor his people and die fighting to meet them again, he climbed the highest mountain and shouted for the the gods... and someone heard. Waspen, a celestial fey, was sent to give him an artifact, the Wind Star. Now Tebra has the power to fight!

I came with a study for the final pose, besides I'm sketching details for his skin and maybe some armor. This last sketches are coming soon, just before the modeling. For now, the pose study:

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2094/2287035394_20f8030d8e_o.jpg

He is about to throw his weapon and he's caring a flag with our team logo on it. W.I.P.

CoNSeptiC: this is my 3D thread, but I have a 2D thread too.

BluntPencil
02-24-2008, 12:16 AM
Looks gorgeous! For some reason, he looks like a masterful climber to me, someone who can almost dance his way up into a tree, and still have both hands free.

DiegoMaia
02-24-2008, 12:43 AM
Atoher perfect silhouette and pose!!
Very beatiful story as well!
I have to say... I'm your fan hahaha

superpauloitalo
02-25-2008, 03:29 AM
Thanks for the comments, guys!

There's some sketches of Tebra's details and his artifact, the Wind Star, next comes the modeling sheet and the model.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3192/2290459546_d6bdb21f99_o.jpg

Tebra is carring in his belt some pieces of machines that he destroyed in combat and now he has some war tatoos for protection instead of armor. I detailed his pants too and it is made of three diferent kinds of fabrics.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2325/2290504590_46f90c0eff_b.jpg

The Wind Star is a weapon that can be thrown and controled mentally by the user while it is flying, it has electrical power too.

madshooter
02-25-2008, 08:37 AM
Tebra is gonna rule:eek: Beautifull concepts on the first page.
All the best:thumbsup:

superpauloitalo
02-25-2008, 03:45 PM
Just some poses:

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2274/2291238262_41f1246ecb_o.jpg

walfrido
02-25-2008, 05:54 PM
just amazing!

keep the good work man!

samize
02-26-2008, 01:44 AM
Way to go. 8D

The Wind Star reminds me of something... do you remember Krull?

Vamp1r0
02-26-2008, 04:00 AM
Really loves plastic of character!

Just for a record drop my two cents here — i think that character is a little boring in details, they should give us his background not only as some physical object but as a personality. Your sketches are really gives me that feeling, but only in dynamic, as soon he stand still he loosing that personality thing :(

But anyway great thread so far keep it up, i'll watch over this thread for sure!

hiroshilee
02-26-2008, 04:27 AM
The sketches has an attractive figure.It's so cool ! ! !

oliveira
02-26-2008, 04:26 PM
great Paulo!! really love all!

Alex Oliver

nikudy
02-26-2008, 05:02 PM
very cool design.

the tatoos work very well with naked skin. you could put some asimmetry on them, and on the entire character for that matter. some shoulder armor on one hand, some mail on the other ...

-claudiu

DiegoMaia
02-26-2008, 05:10 PM
Great!! I love it! :applause:

superpauloitalo
02-27-2008, 07:11 PM
madshooter, Walfrido, hiroshilee, DiegoMaia, Alex: Thank you very much, guys!

Sady: Yes, it's a Krull-like weapon... I think it's cool, hehehe.

Vamp1r0, nikudy: Your comments are very helpful, I'll consider them during the modeling stage. Thank you very much!

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3164/2296759972_2935916631_o.jpg

Well, while I'm in modeling stage these sketches ilustrating Tebra's story poped-up in front of me... so, I have to show them:

ZARACK:
He is the human invoker who defeat Tebra's army and turned him to a monster using the power of his cane of summoning.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3075/2295965451_0fab5945a7_o.jpg

BUR:
He is a naif young giant that fought a powerful beast made of metal and flesh. He should be dead if Tebra hasn't killed the beast. Bur took a beast's tooth and uses it as a weapon in exchange for his right arm that the beast took. He follows Tebra for gratitude and to be as powerful as him one day.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3071/2295965315_9fa4c2c723_o.jpg

oliveira
02-27-2008, 07:54 PM
great concepts Paulo!

Alex Oliver

walrus
02-27-2008, 08:35 PM
Really terrific and thoroughly-conceived sketches. Great work so far!

DiegoMaia
02-28-2008, 08:05 PM
This thread is really fun!!
:D

Xarxys
02-28-2008, 09:52 PM
I love the way this character is coming out you put a lot of thought into him that is going to show when you work on your model. :)

xissburg
02-28-2008, 10:21 PM
Your drawing style is very nice, your characters are full of motion and life. Awesome. You're doing a nice work so far. Congrats and good luck.

[YOYO]
02-29-2008, 03:42 PM
This is some awsome stuff! Love the flow in all of your work, as well as the really solid designs. Keep it up :)

superpauloitalo
03-07-2008, 01:16 PM
Thank you for all the comments, guys! Really thanks!

Finally modeling, it's in early stage but I'm still working.

W.I.P.s:
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3174/2316634884_baec1271a8_o.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3019/2316634834_5a5ce11cbb_o.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3248/2315825795_4466620c89_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2329/2316634764_851bd50506_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2362/2315825729_7c1053a33a_o.jpg

Just warming up on ZBrush, it won't be used:
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2087/2315839421_52b7ef9434_o.jpg
Tebra was turned to a monster by the Zarack that summoned the monstrous form from inside out of Tebra's body, so there is yet some pieces of the original Tebra's human skin.
This transformation is a little like Van Helsing's movie werewolf transformation, but with some pieces of skin staying there.

IanMcQue
03-07-2008, 02:06 PM
Fantastic! Great movement in those pose studies.

I also like the way his horns take on the effect of tangled branches in some of your head concepts.

Keep up the excellent work.

Firerbert
03-07-2008, 02:36 PM
Nice solid start on the modeling! Very close to the concept!

grassetti
03-07-2008, 02:50 PM
great start Paulo!
waiting for more!

c ya!

walrus
03-07-2008, 02:52 PM
It's continuing to look great, Paolo! Lovely surface detail on his face. With each iteration, you seem to be simplifying the horns more and more. They started out huge and spiky, your last sketch retained at least a few prongs... but now they're just simple horns. I thought the more complicated designs had more character to them and felt less generic. Did you change your mind, or will they still be added back in? Anyhow, nice work nonetheless.

Amora
03-07-2008, 06:08 PM
Great Start ! I want to see this finished model!

:thumbsup:

DiegoMaia
03-07-2008, 07:40 PM
The base is looking great so far! I'm looking foreward to see the highpoly model! :D

alessandrolima
03-08-2008, 01:10 AM
Verygood! I'll looking your job, "very near lookink" ok?!

excelent topic!

Alessandro Lima

samize
03-09-2008, 04:34 PM
Going pretty well.

And I kinda like what you did on his mouth and eyes in the Zbrush version.

superpauloitalo
03-09-2008, 04:51 PM
Thanks, buddies!
Now I'm modeling Tebra's body.

Walrus - Don't consider that last picture, that was a zbrush sketch just to practice. I simplified the horns because I think the main features of the caracter are in the body shape, but the horns hold some ramifications yet.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2100/2319640667_c3d1744a4e_o.jpg

Airflow
03-09-2008, 05:33 PM
Great work mate.

walrus
03-09-2008, 07:21 PM
Ah, gotcha! Glad to see you're keeping some of the spikes then. I like them (as I made clear.) Looking nice! :)

BloodTaster
03-09-2008, 08:13 PM
Great job so far man! keep it up!

superpauloitalo
03-10-2008, 06:46 PM
If Tebra was a game hero he would have the following special moves:

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3283/2324782490_1a9ab9cefb_o.jpg

DoInferno
03-10-2008, 11:47 PM
Reaaalllyy nice job!!! Tebra is a kick arse character!

samize
03-16-2008, 11:07 PM
*sips coffee*

Update, please.


Hehe, very nice that you took the time for those special moves sketches.

alessandrolima
03-21-2008, 04:03 AM
And the Updates? Where is it?

superpauloitalo
03-21-2008, 07:24 PM
Airflow - Thank you!

Walrus, BloodTaster - Thanks for the comments, guys. Your works are really inspiring for me!

DoInferno - I'm glad you like it, I'll try to bring the final model A.S.A.P., thanks for the visit on my blog... it deserves a update too, hehehe.

Sady, alima - Hi, buddies! You konw how I'm busy here, but DW is a priority! Tebra is coming soon!

Thank you all for the feed back! See ya.

RobThornely
03-21-2008, 08:49 PM
Strong design, still feel he needs a tweak to make him a tad more "different". Really like your drawings too.

alessandrolima
03-25-2008, 01:11 AM
Ok! But don't forget: I look you!
"Stay Stronger"!

Best Regards!

Blaschke
03-25-2008, 11:04 PM
Your character is really great!
You have to finish it! Keep it up.

BadgerPirate
03-26-2008, 01:00 AM
I'm looking forward to this character also, keep pushing forward.

superpauloitalo
04-03-2008, 02:36 AM
Hey, guys, thanks very much for the comments.
I've finished the main base mesh, hope I can finish Tebra in time.
Take a look at the base mesh.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2269/2383469843_8532183345_o.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3235/2384299428_c62e206d84_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2175/2383469323_1303d6f223_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2188/2384300058_d39e838448_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2169/2383469487_b533bb4fab_o.jpg

superpauloitalo
04-07-2008, 04:37 PM
Finally some ZBrush work on may model. It has many problems yet, but it isn't my final low poly model.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3065/2394103409_ff12cc9092_o.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3272/2394103573_9af9080cc1_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2361/2394937782_526bc2801e_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2105/2394937344_15610e511a_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2403/2394938022_c5508eb6ae_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2074/2394104435_d963d45078_o.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3176/2394104685_9178f690f2_o.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3155/2394938638_c7a5c01703_o.jpg

oliveira
04-07-2008, 05:12 PM
wow!! great sculpt Paulo!! really love it!!

Alex Oliver

DiegoMaia
04-07-2008, 06:06 PM
That's looking great man!!
I can't wait to see this one finished!!

walrus
04-07-2008, 08:46 PM
Good, glad you're still working on this. The model is coming along great so far. Keep going and finish it on time! :thumbsup: Good luck!

RobThornely
04-09-2008, 11:48 PM
Hi again, good sculpt man, good lights too. His face is really strong,now are you gonna finish the rest of him? He is actually pretty kick-ass and it would be a real shame not to finish him now.

superpauloitalo
04-25-2008, 05:15 PM
Well... I didn't get in time to finished Tebra, so I'll keep working on it in my spare time.
Take a look at the actual stage:

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3191/2434946816_18c4d69465_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2033/2434128521_8a2d73d053_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2370/2434945894_a8aa8b7990_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2370/2434946504_7d28e24067_o.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2014/2434127479_1a0f3d4ff6_o.jpg

Thank you very much for all the comments, guys.
See ya!

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