Character: First Head

[FLOw]

excellent 13 year old head!
shit..when I was 13 I was dumb enought to be a level designer, you sure took the right path from the begining :) gl!

[DFGFX]

>excellent 13 year old head!
Thanks!
>shit..when I was 13 I was dumb enought to be a level designer,
It was tempting... But luckily i was depressed and i am sometimes too self confident!
>you sure took the right path from the begining gl!
Thanks!

[leigh]

Hi, no offense, but your model needs A LOT of work. Right now, it looks a little under-evolved.

I recommend that you get an anatomy book, and use it as a reference - because I have never seen a human that looked quite like that. It looks a little like a monkey at the moment :sad:

The jaw and dome of the head are far too large , the ears are in the wrong position - mostly it's proportional and positional problems that you are having.

The actual modelling on the ears is also very strange - I would recommend that you redo them completely.

The actual head can probably still be tweaked to improve it though.

Impressive to see a young kid doing 3D though :) You guys are starting this at younger and younger ages these days!

[DFGFX]

First off, Leigh
I am honored to see you comment on my work..
Second. Thanks a heck lot for saying the truth, will make me better. I completely agree that its inproportionate(must use reference next time).
3) Yeah It looks like a monkey, the ears and the nose suck.!
4) Not that young :p

THANKS ONCE AGAIN!

[leigh]

Hehe I was really worried that you might take offense at my crit - I'm glad to see that you appreciate the honesty - taking criticism and learning from it is one of the finest trademarks of a good artist ;)
Just keep practising, and you'll have a great looking head in no time :thumbsup:

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