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SEPHROTH64
05-01-2003, 09:24 PM
this was a project for class that i had to do. we had to tell a story using flash animation. I know theres a few glitches here and there but i was just wondering what everyones general opinion of it is. I dont really plan on doing that much flash in the future...

thanks in advance for comments:applause:

http://www.rpi.edu/~brodet/imaging/flash/
naki
05-01-2003, 10:11 PM
ok, i'm gonna be harsh here... because i think it'll help you do MUCH better next time.

first of all... it's WAY TOO SLOW... the music is pretty fast paced, and i felt like i wanted to see some good slashing action... but the main guy was moving at wayyyy less than zombie speeds. the music was rockin' away though!

secondly, there was a floating pixel somewhere to the right of the stage during the "sword dude's" rising... it was really taking away my attention from the rest of your animation.

thirdly, i didn't understand the story... two dudes go into a house... and i assume they get slashed up... or was it that they two dudes slashed up the other dude? i dunno... maybe part 2 will reveal everything...?

lastly, it was WAY TOO SLOW...

good try for your first... next time use some storyboards and some references... i guarantee it'll be 1,000 times better =)

peace dude!
SEPHROTH64
05-01-2003, 10:38 PM
hey thanks for the comments
yea i know the story got a lil jumbled, i had to decide whether to work on this some more or study for my other finals that i have early next week....
Web Guy
05-01-2003, 10:42 PM
I am going to fall asleep. I kept waiting and waiting and waiting for something to happen. And then when it did I was so tired I just closed it.. Sorry!!:thumbsdow
technogirl28
05-04-2003, 10:56 PM
I'm not really sure what the story you were going for here was. Also, watch your edges on all of the frames, more than half of them were off.
Jody-Mits
05-09-2003, 02:31 AM
this is cool stuff,,,, nice music :) surprising too. hehe... really, this is kinda slow :shrug:
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