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Muflon
02-17-2008, 11:44 PM
The Final :arteest:

To Judges:

Suddenly I have a problem with my hosting and most of initial pictures cann't be shown now((.
I could restore the final three works, but to restore the whole chain of pictures now is impossible.
Hope it is a temporal problem, I try shortly to solve it somehow.




Winning Pose Shot

http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs30/f/2008/103/0/a/Commissar1_by_borilya.jpg

Modeling Sheet

http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs28/f/2008/103/f/d/Commissar2_by_borilya.jpg

Concept Sheet

http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs25/f/2008/103/1/7/Commissar3_by_borilya.jpg

Name: Commissar
Race: Human
Class: Clericon
Artifact: Warder with a shining fragment of the Kremlin’s ruby Star
Influence: “The Light of October” (Light/Holy)

I have an idea, to mix the style of the young Soviet Union and the style of Warhammer 40K. And in this work I will try to do it.

…After deceitful destruction of “The Heavenly Kremlin", only the few who escaped managed to reach reliable shelters. It was a great success to rescue 26 fragments remained from the Kremlin’s ruby Stars. In secret laboratories were made 26 Artifacts. Rescued fragments were inserted into these Artifacts. From thousand people were chosen hundreds, from hundreds tens, from tens only 26 were selected. They became these Artifacts and just they should deliver “The Light of October” into the most remote parts of a Galaxy…

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The first two sketches


http://borisov.vip.su/Images/sketch1.jpg



http://borisov.vip.su/Images/sketch2.jpg

TheBladeRoden
02-18-2008, 12:21 AM
Cool idea, I've had an interest in genres incorporating fantasized versions of the World War powers.

Muflon
02-18-2008, 01:45 PM
Hi people!
This is a new sketch for this Cliricon. I thought it could be useful fur his mission some old text and a pair of candles to carry by.
What do you think about this man?
What can make him more convincing?

http://borisov.vip.su/Images/sceth3.jpg

Xarxys
02-18-2008, 02:22 PM
That looks great I wish I could paint like that keep up the good work.

Muflon
02-18-2008, 03:19 PM
Inspirations #1


http://borisov.vip.su/Images/Inspirations1.jpg

Obmoc
02-18-2008, 04:17 PM
It appears that the first image captures your idea better because it keeps the industrious feel better because of what appears to be gears on the shoulders. During WW2 Russia was excellent at producing goods. I feel in the last couple shots the industrious feel was lost.The first image reminds me of an iron clad knight. actually like Iron Man. A Russian Iron man.

Muflon
02-18-2008, 08:12 PM
To Obmoc:
Thanks for the comments, the idea of a russian iron man is really interesting, I also think about it.
But as I can see this, for the "cliricon" class which i've chosen man schould have lighter armour. That's why i try to variate the first sketch.

Muflon
02-18-2008, 08:13 PM
here is the boot.

http://borisov.vip.su/Images/boot.jpg

Muflon
02-18-2008, 09:29 PM
Inspirations #2

http://borisov.vip.su/Images/Inspirations2.jpg

Muflon
02-19-2008, 07:46 PM
A speed art for image elaboration.


http://borisov.vip.su/Images/portret.jpg

Rion411
02-19-2008, 07:56 PM
I really like your idea, should turn out awesome. The concept/painting looks really good too.

Muflon
02-20-2008, 02:10 PM
Hello, friends!
I think I have a problem with my pictures.
Some people told me that they don't see the pictures. Can you see them or not?
Please write, or perhaps you can help me to load them correctly. Thanks

Loukor
02-20-2008, 02:11 PM
Can't see the picture, how are you loading them?

Muflon
02-20-2008, 02:25 PM
Can't see the picture, how are you loading them?

1. Manage attachment
2. file to unload -> unload
3.klick the image-> it opens in the new window
4. copy the URL
5.go to message-> klick insert image-> enter the URL of the image
6. submit reply

Which step is wrong?
Thanks for help

Loukor
02-20-2008, 02:41 PM
I use my own ftp to upload images so I have no clue but it seems like your first image showed up, looks great. Cheers

Muflon
02-20-2008, 09:50 PM
Hello, comrades!

Here is the new sketch.
A book on the man's right schoulder I decided to turn into a bear's head,
though I am not sure jet schould it be a bear's or a wolf's head.
Perhaps some awesome monstr passes better.


http://borisov.vip.su/Images/sceth4.jpg

AlexNovo
02-21-2008, 08:22 PM
блин чувак, клева!:) мож ему еще усы:)

Very good:)

Xarxys
02-21-2008, 08:50 PM
That is depending on which alignment you are aiming for if you are going to do a more evil character I would say wolf but for a more righteous and good character I would say bear.

Muflon
02-21-2008, 09:13 PM
блин чувак, клева!:) мож ему еще усы:)

Very good:)

Спасибо.
Про усы я ещё не думал, т.к. не определился с рассой - человек или нежить.
Хотя с усами будет пожалуй веселей, Будённый - a la Warhammer :wip:

Muflon
02-21-2008, 09:43 PM
That is depending on which alignment you are aiming for if you are going to do a more evil character I would say wolf but for a more righteous and good character I would say bear.

I think, you are right. But I thought to work out this character as in Warhammer 40K, where is no good and evil, only the opposite groups.
Now I think the bear remains because it is more associated with Russia.

BluntPencil
02-21-2008, 09:45 PM
Looks good! His head looks a bit too exposed to me though...maybe play more on the bear-bit, and put a thick fur-rim around the neck-area?

Muflon
02-22-2008, 08:07 PM
http://forums.cgsociety.org/attachment.php?attachmentid=124100&stc=1

hi, everybody!
Some more work is done. Here is a probable colour version of Commissar.
I draw the complete layout and added an enemy character - the awesome machanical creature "BURZHUI" :)
The inspiration list follows soon.
God, I really enjoy this work,
to mix different cultural and temporal layers is so exciting!

Muflon
02-22-2008, 09:19 PM
Inspirations #3


http://borisov.vip.su/Images/Inspirations3.jpg

farazmobin
02-22-2008, 09:26 PM
awesome concept dude.:thumbsup:..the face reminds me of megatron

SashaP
02-23-2008, 11:09 PM
Awesome style your going with, it adds character!

Muflon
02-24-2008, 03:43 PM
Hi, people :)
Here is the new sketch. I made some deteils more exact.
There is a bear on his right schoulder (not a lion, though it looks really like one).
I added a bears fell. The claws are additional weapon.

http://borisov.vip.su/Images/sketch6.jpg

AlexNovo
02-24-2008, 05:37 PM
Russian hunter to bears:)))) Cool pal!

Muflon
02-24-2008, 09:10 PM
Looks good! His head looks a bit too exposed to me though...maybe play more on the bear-bit, and put a thick fur-rim around the neck-area?
Thank you for your "fur-rim" idea, :thumbsup: I used it but a little bit different :)

awesome concept dude.:thumbsup:..the face reminds me of megatron
The Mechanical monstr is only the beginning... My idea is to make the complete battle-scene :wip:

Awesome style your going with, it adds character!
glad you like it, I do my best to make it interesting :)

Russian hunter to bears:)))) Cool pal!
Jawohl :wip:

Veles
02-26-2008, 06:39 AM
Ух ты! :thumbsup: монументально! и идеалогически верно!:)
Very good concept!

Muttonhead
02-26-2008, 08:40 AM
Whoa, it's like the Uber-Commie! Interesting concept, indeed, though I can hardly say I approve of your character's politics.... I might have to draw Mega-Libertarian and have them fight it out!

I do think this is pretty interesting though, there is something really neat about taking inspiration from more modern mythologies.

KEIN MEHRHEIT FUR DIE MITLEID!

Sanislov
02-26-2008, 09:07 AM
nice concept:) But its looks like a warhammer marine...a little.

Muflon
02-26-2008, 02:15 PM
Ух ты! :thumbsup: монументально! и идеалогически верно!:)
Very good concept!
Спасибо за комментарий, товарищ Veles.
Служу Советскому Союзу! :D


Whoa, it's like the Uber-Commie! Interesting concept, indeed, though I can hardly say I approve of your character's politics.... I might have to draw Mega-Libertarian and have them fight it out!

I do think this is pretty interesting though, there is something really neat about taking inspiration from more modern mythologies.

KEIN MEHRHEIT FUR DIE MITLEID!
I am glad that you like it.
My variant of "Mega-Libertarian" you can see on the colourful sketch. :deal:
This is a joke of course. :p

I really try to avoid standard fantasy cliché, there is a great number of other cliché , which I would like to mix in this work.
As far as Soviet Union history is concerned, there are, of course, different points of view. But this gone away country has left such an interesting aesthetics and there are so many layers in it, that I simply couldn't hold myself from picking it up.

nice concept:) But its looks like a warhammer marine...a little.
Thank you for the comments.
I like that it is noticeable, I stated it in my first comment. :)

AlexNovo
03-13-2008, 10:41 AM
куда пропал чувак!?

Regarding bear on his shoulder, its begin to looks like CGtalk.ru logo, may be use white bear or another design?

Muflon
03-14-2008, 08:55 PM
куда пропал чувак!?

Regarding bear on his shoulder, its begin to looks like CGtalk.ru logo, may be use white bear or another design?
So, I am back at last :bounce:
and new works are coming soon.

As for the bear's head, I took this image from Warhammer 40K, and used it several days before CGtalk.ru stated its logo. Now I am really a bit in a doubt, but still did not decide what to do with it. :eek:
cgsociety.org logo i want to apply as a detail of Comissar's warder.

AlexNovo
03-15-2008, 09:46 AM
Hi,
Just chang design of the bear to a different or may be more communist like:))))))

Muflon
03-15-2008, 11:02 PM
Hi, friends!
After a long break I am here again. I started to work at the final illustration.
Of course it is inexact jet and I see a lot of bugs, but I think it is going to be more or less like this.
I used cgsociety.org logo as a detail of Commissar’s warder.
A bear’s head remains, because I think it adds much to this image.
To mechanical creature "BURZHUI» I added a secondary weapon - “flame-thrower” :rolleyes:



http://borisov.vip.su/Images/Step_1.jpg

AlexNovo
03-18-2008, 10:24 PM
Класно ты над буржуем поиздевалсо:))) Такое оружее воткнул ему ггг

Veles
03-21-2008, 09:28 AM
Буржуин-прсто бомба! и с фителем идея хорошА!:) Ждем апдейтов, следим с интересом! Дешь стране угля, товарищ Muflon! :applause: :thumbsup:

Muflon
03-24-2008, 09:02 PM
Latest update

http://borisov.vip.su/Images/Step_2.jpg

Muflon
03-28-2008, 08:58 PM
Latest update
http://borisov.vip.su/Images/Step_4.jpg

Muflon
04-04-2008, 08:48 PM
Hello, friends!
There is not much time left till the end of this challenge.
I would like to ask you for a pair of useful hints concerning my Modeling Sheet.
It seems to be ready, but I think something is out of order,
and I cannot understand what is it. :cry:
I am ready to get any kind of criticism. :banghead:


http://borisov.vip.su/Images/Modeling-Sheet.jpg

Muflon
04-07-2008, 03:32 PM
Hi, comrades!
I am here again.
There should be 3 square pictures 1000x1000pxl?
Now it’s finished with Concept Sheet and Modeling Sheet.
I hope they meet the requirements of the challenge.
The last one (Illustration) is still in the process.


Winning Pose Shot

http://borisov.vip.su/Images/Art.jpg


Modeling Sheet

http://borisov.vip.su/Images/Modeling-Sheet2.jpg


Concept Sheet

http://borisov.vip.su/Images/scethes.jpg

AlexNovo
04-07-2008, 03:47 PM
Охрененный дизайн подложек!! Молоток!

Veles
04-07-2008, 06:34 PM
Вот это да! :thumbsup: Вот это называется "Получи , буржуй гранату!":)))здОрово!

Muflon
04-08-2008, 05:52 PM
Hi, friends!
I have already a funclub. :beer:
This is a FanArt of my son (5 years old).
Pay attention to "BURZUI" - he is in the middle and has all the necessary details. :bounce:

http://borisov.vip.su/Images/Fanart.jpg

Muflon
04-09-2008, 08:14 PM
The Final :arteest:



http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs30/f/2008/103/0/a/Commissar1_by_borilya.jpg

RobThornely
04-09-2008, 11:31 PM
I can see your pictures just fine btw. Great ideas, brilliant backstory. Really quite off the wall notion which I love. All seems a bit Sergeant Peppers which is no bad thing. Love how much thought you've given the whole thing, not just some Blizzard rip off but something quite unique.

Muflon
04-11-2008, 08:51 PM
Thank you for the comments!

"The Art of World of WarCraft" was my "reference book")), I also often looked through the works "The sons of the storm" while working.
But really, I tried to connect very different things together and for all make it a story.
I am a little bit tired of it, and happy, that I could it finish.
:beer:

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