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visionmaster
04-17-2002, 08:38 AM
http://membres.lycos.fr/visionmaster2002fr/hpbimg/un%20ange%20passe....jpg

3dsmax finalrender andsuperm*n

H A D E S
04-17-2002, 08:59 AM
really good your superman but il y a trop de blur aen avant plan alors on ne peut vraiment critiquer ton travail mais a premiere vu sa l air cool post un autre render plus detailler
H A D E S

caldeira
04-17-2002, 09:55 AM
Juz one thing: are you a robot?

popnGEAR
04-17-2002, 10:05 AM
Looks great. I like the old and wrinkly look a lot. Only thing I would change is the definitely the depth of field, tone it down a lot, and his eyebrows would probably would be grey/white instead of brown :).

Caldeira: what does your question mean? :confused:

GladeR
04-17-2002, 06:12 PM
:thumbsup: it's great, but maybe the image have much blur.
:bounce:

Korgath
04-17-2002, 06:24 PM
Lower the blur.. Else it's great :thumbsup:

dmonk
04-17-2002, 06:48 PM
Is it based on the alex Ross version?

xtrm3d
04-17-2002, 07:11 PM
ya trops de blur !!
hein koi ?? c est pas nouveau ??? :-)
ok bo boulot !!!

mo j aime bien
:D
christophe

visionmaster
04-17-2002, 09:33 PM
you all have right !
ze blur is vired...mais il en reste un peut :)
+ 1 ptit gros plan pour la route.
http://membres.lycos.fr/visionmaster2002fr/hpbimg/un%20ange%20passe...2.jpg http://membres.lycos.fr/visionmaster2002fr/hpbimg/un%20ange%20passe...3.jpg

visionmaster
04-18-2002, 02:30 AM
http://membres.lycos.fr/visionmaster2002fr/hpbimg/grrrr2%20copy.jpg

ambassador
04-18-2002, 03:14 AM
COMPRESS your FILES

Teyon
04-18-2002, 04:16 AM
Ross' version has the "S" as Red and Black. I also agree that there's just too much blur going on in that first post. Also, His hair has a too much of a part in it. I don't recall it having that much but, I guess you're allowed some level of creative freedom. His cape doesn't cover his neck, either. Overall, great work!

tante jeanne
04-18-2002, 08:27 PM
the last image is amazing, marc.
:)

toma
04-18-2002, 09:34 PM
Hi visionmaster, and everybody around you,

I'll talk in english even if I'm french and you too.

Well I think that model is pretty cool. I especially like the last picture you uploaded, with the head close-up.

Thanks a lot for the blur-reducing :) It would have killed your scene otherwise.

I think I have just some comments about the translucent material. I think that this effect is too much on those images...and your superm*n looks to be made of wax, like candles !

One comment about the first picture : It looks a bit too "weak" old and fragile. I don't know if you understand what i mean.

Anyway I don't even know if you wanted critics but here you are :) (I must have forgotten I'm not in the WIP section...).

Anyway that's a great work here ! Keep going ! Best regards.

toma.

GRMac13
04-19-2002, 01:45 AM
Great modelling job, I kind of like the translucent skin, maybe tone it down a bit. Oh, and the texture on the blue suit looks kinda like foam, dont think you need that there bump map, it really takes away from the rest of the image. Same goes for the emblem on the chest, looks too fake compared to the head. Rework those textures, and you have a kick-ass render.

cybermanzm
04-19-2002, 10:07 PM
are you rembrandt ?

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