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somethingofthesort
02-14-2008, 04:28 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/289178/289178_1202966930_medium.jpg

Title: Violin
Name: Wayne Silasi
Country: USA
Software: Maya, mental ray

A quick violin render for my animation. Modeled in Maya, rendered in Mental Ray with final gather and HDRI Lighting. Any critiques are welcome.
Necronomiden
02-14-2008, 09:27 AM
that's a violin allright :) but i think the floor tile bump is a little to strong even if its rock:D
VictorSantos
02-14-2008, 05:32 PM
I agree with Octostatue the floor bump is a lil' bit strong but nice modelling and good job with mental ray dude :thumbsup:

Can you show us some wires?

Good job anyway :)
cenkkara
02-14-2008, 08:25 PM
very nice modeling & rendering!
somethingofthesort
02-15-2008, 12:36 AM
here are some wires and an Ambient Occlusion pass. I agree that the bump needs to be less, and will do so with my next render. I will also round out the violin top too. Thanks for the crits. Let me know if you guys think of anything else.

http://digitalarts.bgsu.edu/portfolios/silasiw/forums/violinAmbOccul.jpg

http://digitalarts.bgsu.edu/portfolios/silasiw/forums/violinWireframe_001.jpg

http://digitalarts.bgsu.edu/portfolios/silasiw/forums/violinWireframe_002.jpg
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