PDA

View Full Version : My VFx Challenge Entry


Wilson-3d
04-30-2003, 09:30 PM
Hi Gang! I just finished my entry for the VFX Challenge. I have been reading the sticky at the top the last few days and seem to of been on the right track. I posted at the vfx forum but next time I will post here too. I could of used the extra feed back. Comments are welcome.

http://www.fred-speaks.com/CM/VFX/vfxfinal.jpg

Check out a 5 sec animation (1meg)
Outpost animation (http://www.fred-speaks.com/CM/VFX/VFxF.mov)

If you would rather comment directly in the VFx Thread
VFx Thread (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=50558)

flingster
04-30-2003, 09:37 PM
very cool.
reminds me of a level out of the jedi game.
like the animation and sound.

only comment would be the right hand building dirt/grime the scale seems to big ...and the pipes down need more grime or less spec.
other than that...top result.
:thumbsup:

FredSpeaks
04-30-2003, 09:40 PM
Looks good. I like the sounds alot. Did you use cinema to render the sound or do it in post?

Wilson-3d
04-30-2003, 09:41 PM
Hey thanks. Good comments. Fred Speaks-The sound was done in After Effects.

smoke
04-30-2003, 09:58 PM
Wow came out great!!
just one comment: the "smoke" is that supposed to be coming out of that cylinder object? If so, during the animation it doesn't track with it.

Wilson-3d
04-30-2003, 10:04 PM
The smoke was just supposed to be coming from an object out of view. However you are the second person to mention that to me so I guess I should of made it look more one way or the other. Even though I did not intend on it coming from the cylinder It looks a little like it is supposed to be. Which looks a little odd. I just never noticed it until it was brought up. Thanks for the comments.

xeno
04-30-2003, 10:13 PM
i just wanted to say that the smoke does appear to come from somethng out of view to me, and not at all from the cilinder. I think its looking really good!

JoelOtron
05-01-2003, 02:14 AM
Awesome! Looks great

I have to start checking out these challenges--looks like fun!

medula
05-01-2003, 04:42 PM
Sweet image!

CGTalk Moderation
01-15-2006, 12:00 AM
This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.