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jackie66
02-11-2008, 02:22 AM
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Title: Four Seasons
Name: Jackie Vanderpol
Country: Canada
Software: Illustrator

A project for school, we had to create a series of illustrations on the four seasons, develop a main style and theme to flow throughout and also use color theory. These are my first illustrator drawings.
exStatic1
02-11-2008, 08:53 AM
That is awesome! Nice theme, and perfect colors for the seasons! Did you get an A?
hinoon
02-11-2008, 04:34 PM
Very nice and clean. Looks a bit 70's. My only crit (strickly subjective) is maybe making the spring colour a little more green or add more warm green to induce the sense of renewal.
twoleftfeet
02-12-2008, 08:03 AM
yea, have got an A affirmatively.:buttrock:
FRENZIEDmind
02-12-2008, 10:47 AM
Excellent work! I like the style.

crit: The kerning on the words looks too extreme... especially on the word SPRING. The letters look smashed up against each other (which becomes distracting and draws attention to it's self in a negative way).
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