Your Opinion Please.

[LstDROPzz]

thanks for silence

[hilbruks]

your image takes way to long time to load. several minutes

[CybrGfx]

thanks for silenceYou are MOST welcome.
You are very presumptuous to expect people to jump onto your post immediatedly, with a rude follow up like this after only an hour. People DO have lives, and no one image is so important that people need to drop everything to tell you what they think. Please try to keep this in mind, and patiently wait at least 24 hours before "bumping" your thread. Also, IF you do, try not to be so snarky and rude. I can almost guarantee THAT type of response will NOT garner you more replies, if anything, it will discourage most people from even bothering.

You can consider me one of the latter, but since I took the time to tell you how your rude remark was NOT appreciated, I will now also take the additional time and effort to tell you that your image looks very crude at this stage, with your foundational sketch little more than scribbled lines, not a clean linework for you to work from. As a result, you have anatomical issues.

The colors are nothing special, the metal (?) looks flat, and the orange mess on the RH side of the canvas gives absolutely NO indication of what it is or should be.

You do not provide any sort of setting, or backstory to this image, so that the viewer can give you opinions on whether your illustration fits the story you are trying to tell. The costuming is too imagined and fantasy to place this in any type of historically accurate text, and honestly, the painting is just too undeveloped at this stage to do more than look at it and think, "Yes, he is right, he DOES have problems with shadows, AND many others."

If you KNOW you have problems with "shadows and many others," then why do you not FIX those before DEMANDING attention from others to point them out? If you at least specify those areas that YOU KNOW you need to fix, the other members will not have to waste time telling you what you already know, they can then tell you about what they see that you did not. Or, if you specify what problems you are having, you can be given more precise suggestions on how to fix them.

Perhaps you are new to asking others in a professional art arena to look at, evaluate, critique and make suggestions, and do not understand how these things work.
As with all good things in life, they come with Time and Patience. Just as you cannot create a really good artwork with a few quick scribbles and daubs of paint, so you cannot expect your every motion on the planet to generate a prompt and immediate response. We are a friendly and helpful bunch of people.

I would suggest you work on cleaning up this image, tightening up your background, and better defining the orange starburst off his arm. I would also rough in the colors for the lower portion and define the costuming at the bottom. All you have now are a bunch of shapeless lines.

When there is more to look at and understand, there will be more to comment upon.

Best of success to you,
~Cyber

[LstDROPzz]

TO CybrGfx:

Thanks for comments and critique.
You said that I`m rude and very presumptuous...may be...but I realize all these that you wrote, and, sorry that so show myself((.
You made many suggestions about colors, scribble lines, anatomy and e.t.c, thanks,because I don`t pay attention at these things.


TO: >hilbruks
About long loading of my picture.
I know only one site,where i can upload my pictures and these pictures may be available for many people-http://www.imageshack.us/....I don`t know any site with the same functions.Do you can offer anything?
ThaNKS! :)

[LaughingBun]

umm so what is going on in the picture?

[LstDROPzz]

umm so what is going on in the picture?

There is wounded soldier near brick wall...The Basic landscape is hidden,because I work with the face,blood, and clothes, and I decided don`t show this.What do you can say about this?

[LstDROPzz]

small update...I did work with face,none the less I dislike this...May be eyes?lips?and...Don`t know....What do you think?

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