my first low poly

[krets]

You've got a good bit of redundant geometry and your proportions are not correct. particularly the back of the neck into the head. I would remove some of thoes edges from the crease at the cheek and upper lip. For as much geometry as you spare for the nose and lips, they can likely never be animated, becuase there is not enough to support the deformations around them.
the forehead swells too much. Your eyes nose and mouth are in the correct spots.

So placements are good, form is poor.

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