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srisha
02-10-2008, 07:52 AM
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Title: The Winter Panorama
Name: Naga Purushottam
Country: India
Software: Maya, mental ray, Photoshop

This scene is made with Maya and rendered with Mental Ray. This is my practice image; done by following a tutorial. As far as the scene is considered, it is representation of a winter room in total serenity. I appreciate your comments.
Neox3d
02-10-2008, 03:52 PM
first i think its a good effort, but soem things need to be improved,

1. the light seems so strong on the left of the pic, so much that it white washes the initial part, but the rest of the room doesnt have that kind of strong light impression. the toones dont match,

2. the rug is either to bumped or low textured cant say,

3, the bumping is quite too much in the scene

4. most of the things seems very straight/sharp-edged, in real-life, its not that sharp

4. the picture is too grainy.

generally for practice it might do, but u need to improve. good luck
carlw
02-10-2008, 11:57 PM
yeah, that's a good effort, it just needs a bit of tweaking i think. The bump is definitely a bit high on the couch closest to the camera.

Otherwise it's good.
archlancer
02-13-2008, 04:14 PM
nice composition.. could be more contrast of light and shadow.
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