Class sleeper

[bleumoon]

Hmm . . . well I think this would be more suited for the W.I.P. forum.

With that being said, I really like what you've blocked out so far. I think the poses are strong, and it reads well. I do have one comment though. At the beginning he's supposed to be sleepy. I'm not sure that he would slump all the way back in his chair to fall asleep.

The pose you have at the beginning is good. Perhaps you could just keep him there to fall asleep, or maybe slump him even further down over his desk. You could then have a greater contrast when he arches back into the take.

In any case I like what you've done so far. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see where you take this.

[prashantyadav2]

Hi Chris... thanks for your comment...
that's really good idea ....U will see the changes in next post...

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