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JordanMK
02-09-2008, 03:02 PM
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Title: Living downstairs
Name: Jordan Gorgiev
Country: Macedonia
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop, VRay

For this image I concentrated my work on textures and lighting,
for the DOF effect I used the KPT Blurrr filter with a Z-depth channel as a mask, it's not physically correct but it's much faster than rendering with camera effects.

Comments are most welcome.
Thanks for viewing.
cenkkara
02-09-2008, 11:16 PM
very good texturing ! I agree with dof effect :)
marcotronic
02-10-2008, 08:18 AM
Sorry to say that but the DOF effect ruins the whole picture which is otherwise very nice. You should really take the DOF out...


Marco
luzak1
02-10-2008, 03:49 PM
creepy place, but good looking. For me 4-
Neox3d
02-10-2008, 04:03 PM
nice textures, some suggestions
1. remove the human,
2. remove the lens flare
3, adjust the dof, i bit low.

over all very nice. 3 stars
azynkron
02-11-2008, 07:42 AM
There's, IMHO, a problem with proportions.. When I look at the picture I get the feeling that it's squashed..
JordanMK
02-11-2008, 05:30 PM
Interesting comments,

I'll keep in mind your advice guys,

thanks.
jidus
02-11-2008, 05:46 PM
Disclaimer: I *DO* like the image!! I just have some creative criticism. :D

I don't know if I agree that the DOF ruins the whole image, but I do think you need to lower it. it's not quite natural. It more seems that I need to put my spectacles on to see outside.

Try doing something a little more believeable with the human. I have a feeling that if I were in that position, I wouldn't just be laying in the middle of the floor. try to put yourself in their shoes.

Everything (especially the railing IMO) is a bit too shiny. You have a very grunge look with the textures, and the shininess is counteracting it. It may be that the lighting is too bright, I cannot tell.

other than that, I do enjoy the image! Keep up the good work, and post an update :D
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