CGTalk - Superman paint

carlosrok

02-09-2008, 06:01 AM

Hi,

I ever visit this forum and never post here. Finally I decided to put a work here,I spent two days to making this picture. I hope your critiques and comments.
http://www.carlosrocha.art.br/images/superman_finalart.jpg

Thanx for your time.

CybrGfx

02-09-2008, 05:40 PM

Stunning color and visual texture.

Superman looks REALLY old and wrinkly, though...

Nice work!

~Cyber

crazytalk

02-11-2008, 04:52 PM

I think the drawing has good visual appeal but you have an inconsistency in your composition. The focal point is obviously Superman but he needs to be integrated into the background as well and it looks like you are drawing in two different styles (or more than likely you spent all your time on the figure and threw the background in at the end) the background and cape match but the figure is done differently. You should work the whole drawing in equal parts not just the figure.

carlosrok

02-13-2008, 12:21 AM

CybrGfx: Thank you for your words.
Crazytalk: I just read your critiques and I agree, I spent much time with the figure and cape, like you said; "I should work the whole drawing in equal parts not just the figure". Thank you for your comments.

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