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jfalgout
02-08-2008, 11:54 PM
Here's an updated version of my animations I posted a couple weeks ago, and a few new ones. Feel free to tear 'em up (haha, constructively, of course.) Thanks for checking out my stuff!

Horse Jump (http://www.justinfalgout.com/Horse.mov)

Hind Takeoff (http://www.justinfalgout.com/Helicopter.mov)

Clumbsy Scientist (http://www.justinfalgout.com/Dialogue.mov)

Grocery Girl (http://www.justinfalgout.com/Groceries.mov)


*Special thanks to JD Cragg for the Hind Model

I appologize if the downloads take a while.

Izzyw
02-11-2008, 12:05 AM
Hey man- Well since no ones commented on here yet.

I guess ill start it off.

your lip sync looks pretty good. The only thing u could maybe do is on your first pose you could probably show a bit more negative space between the arm and the body, just move the elbow a bit.

The helicopter- I still think this needs a bit of more work. I just feel that it takes off a bit to clean. I feel it needs a bit more life, i know its a helicopter, i just think it takes off to smooth. I hope you know what i mean.

The horse- I think this looks pretty good.

Grocery girl- I'm not sure if you've animated the face, but i think you could do it a lot more, u know blinks etc. Watch the purse intersecting with the car. I also think that when she sighs you could push the line of action a bit more and overlap the head a bit more too.
I also think the car swing is too fast.

Well, i hope that helps a bit. Good work by the way. I cant believe we are reaching the end. Later

jfalgout
02-11-2008, 07:42 PM
Thanks man. I havent touched her face yet. I was saving all that for last. I'll work on the timing of the door too.

We still have 3 weeks left to polish. I think I'm in pretty good shape to get everything done. How's your work coming?

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