View Full Version : Helicopter, Horse Jump, Scientist, and a Grocery Accident
02-09-2008, 12:54 AM
Here's an updated version of my animations I posted a couple weeks ago, and a few new ones. Feel free to tear 'em up (haha, constructively, of course.) Thanks for checking out my stuff!
Horse Jump (http://www.justinfalgout.com/Horse.mov)
Hind Takeoff (http://www.justinfalgout.com/Helicopter.mov)
Clumbsy Scientist (http://www.justinfalgout.com/Dialogue.mov)
Grocery Girl (http://www.justinfalgout.com/Groceries.mov)
*Special thanks to JD Cragg for the Hind Model
I appologize if the downloads take a while.
02-11-2008, 01:05 AM
Hey man- Well since no ones commented on here yet.
I guess ill start it off.
your lip sync looks pretty good. The only thing u could maybe do is on your first pose you could probably show a bit more negative space between the arm and the body, just move the elbow a bit.
The helicopter- I still think this needs a bit of more work. I just feel that it takes off a bit to clean. I feel it needs a bit more life, i know its a helicopter, i just think it takes off to smooth. I hope you know what i mean.
The horse- I think this looks pretty good.
Grocery girl- I'm not sure if you've animated the face, but i think you could do it a lot more, u know blinks etc. Watch the purse intersecting with the car. I also think that when she sighs you could push the line of action a bit more and overlap the head a bit more too.
I also think the car swing is too fast.
Well, i hope that helps a bit. Good work by the way. I cant believe we are reaching the end. Later
02-11-2008, 08:42 PM
Thanks man. I havent touched her face yet. I was saving all that for last. I'll work on the timing of the door too.
We still have 3 weeks left to polish. I think I'm in pretty good shape to get everything done. How's your work coming?
02-11-2008, 08:42 PM
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