Game Model: Pitbull

[Solve]

vool concept, it's not often that someone models a dog. :buttrock:

crit:

the ears are wrong, they should be facing outward. and the eyes should be spread farther apart.

[nofxsapunk]

ok i fixed the eyes and the eyes i belive tell me what you think

[Jboy]

the snout is too square, and you should make the eyes bug out a little, they look like holes instead of protrusions. also, it looks like you may have smoothed it, don't do that, show the base mesh (and or wire), especially for game models.

[erik2003]

The eyes are exactly frontal now, the eye of a dog is very frontal but not completely. They should be rotated a little around y (Maya) or z(max) axis.

[nofxsapunk]

hey here is the latest on my pitbull, ive worked on him for about 45 minutes now
C&C please

[nofxsapunk]

hey here is once again another update on the pitbull, about a hour and a half now, still posting even though im not getting any crits, BUT I WOULD LIKE SOME CRITS THOUGH

[jfalconer]

Well, its hard to know whether you are trying for a cartoony style or a realistic style, I don't believe you've made it very clear.:shrug:

Obviously this will determine whether people think you are heading in the right direction. I would say if it is meant to be cartoony, it is too realistic - if it is meant to be realistic, than it is too cartoony. Hope that makes sense. :hmm:

In any case, reference material reference material reference material. The more you have the better it will be. Even if you want to make it cartoony, if you have ref material it will look all the better.

[nofxsapunk]

ok im going for realism and here is some of the reference's im using, and i use to have a pitbull

[nofxsapunk]

another pics

[JahnkeKong]

Hope this helps some -- I looked at my own pit bull pup as refrence as well!


http://scastudent1.hdigi.com/JenJahnke/pitbullcrit.jpg

[JahnkeKong]

also noticed one more thing which is the pit you are using as reference has a very deep and wide chest, whereas it is not very pronounced on your model

I love these dogs so much, hope you don't think I'm being to picky!

here's a picture of my boy, for more refrence ;)

http://scastudent1.hdigi.com/JenJahnke/happybutch.jpg

[nofxsapunk]

thanks man im glad someone finally game me some good comments on this and no your not picky i was noticing some of those earlier today, im going to make the changes right away Thanks

[JahnkeKong]

it was easier to crit once you said you weren't going for a cartoony style :) Be sure to post an update!

[nofxsapunk]

ok i will have updates soon, i would have had one earlier but as i went to goto save my computer shut down for some reason so i lost it, but i did fix those areas you said and a few more

[nofxsapunk]

ok here is a update that has those problems fixed i belive

[nofxsapunk]

ok here is a texture test , very quick but it has the besics of what i want

http://avmonkey.com/3d/pitbullp7.jpg

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