Matte Asia night

[CybrGfx]

Not bad, but the cracked earth in front and surrounding the building looks weird and out of place. Buildings, especially large ones, don't just sit in the middle of nowhere, with nothing in the way of roads, paths, courtyards, parking, etc. surrounding them. They don't sprout out of the ground in the middle of the night. The buildings on the LH side are a nice touch, but they, too, have sprouted directly out of the ground...

The lights in the upper area of the building look "fake" and contrived. The glow is unnatural, like the cracked earth surroundings. What is causing that light from the windows? Yellow lightbulbs?

It's not a bad piece, it just needs a bit more thought behind the actual physical presence of such a large structure.

~Cyber

[Greenham]

You may also want to try posting in the Digital Matte Painting Forum (http://forums.cgsociety.org/forumdisplay.php?f=196).

[Globlue]

CybrGfx, thank you for your advices, i will change it, i have some ideas to ameliorate this mattepainting.

Greenham, sorry i didn't found this section before, now i know where it is.thx :)

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