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Gkaine
04-29-2003, 11:48 PM
it is lacking something i cant quite put my finger on it
c&c are greatly appreciated
edit: someone tell me whats wrong with the face plz:D
http://www.purgatory.net/joe/crend.jpg

Gkaine
04-30-2003, 01:54 AM
1bumponly

JAG3D
04-30-2003, 03:12 AM
his nose is very un-natural, theres a huge bulge over the bridge of the nose, this throws it off quite a bit.

plus the eyes are a bit too far apart it seems, but this may have to do with the area between the nose

the ears could use a bit of work but theyre not the main concern.

great start though

is he supposed to be an old man ? is that why youre going for the bigger ugly nose, as many old men have ?

zzacmann
04-30-2003, 03:19 AM
The ears actually look pretty good. The outer crevace is way too deep though and should taper off right before it hits the ear lobe. They have a lot of potential. Most people make their ears way too flat and shallow so I think you are heading in the right direction.:thumbsup:

Gkaine
04-30-2003, 07:38 AM
ok i will change those things and check out the results thanks

FallenSwordsman
04-30-2003, 08:02 AM
Good start - he is very bumpy though - the weird lump at the bridge of the nose has already been pointed out as has the depth of ear thing. I think the creases that define the mouth barrel running from the outer edges of the nostrils seem way too defined - they should be a lot more subtle than that. The tip of the nose seems a bit pointy too (see profile view). Also consider the positioning/size of the ear - have a look at someone in profile then look at your own model - especially the bottom of the ear and its alignment with the rest of the facial features. Chin seems a bit pointy too but that may just be how you're wanting it to look. Sorry for all the crits - it is coming along well and hopefully it shouldn't take too much to sort these points out.

Dreamwave
04-30-2003, 10:56 AM
the ears are weird, but I can't explain what I mean in English :rolleyes:

the seem to be very deep

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