character:girl

[bigB]

I like the dolfin:p

it looks good but the eye's look a bit big to me:thumbsup:

[sza_sam]

A little hair poking out of her hat and you would have a classy dame.
Maybe her chin could use a little work.

[tonpe]

Hello,the image is finished.

[secretasianman]

the second time you fixed the bottom lip a littl but it still needs work becasue the top lip is big.

[tonpe]

The lip will try to correct it as rapidly as possible like the reflection of the right eye.
Thanks for your commentaries.

[Stupeyfied]

I agree that there needs to be some hair coming out of the hat...unless you are intending for her to be bald?

[tonpe]

New adjustments in the eyes and the part of the mouth http://www.3danima.com/l2b.jpg

[tonpe]

wire
http://www.3danima.com/visormalla.jpg
texture
http://www.3danima.com/textu.jpg
texture and wire
http://www.3danima.com/caraconmalla.jpg

[tonpe]

New changes, I hope that they like
http://www.3danima.com/l3b.jpg

Thanks.

[tonpe]

new change.
http://www.3danima.com/l5b.jpg
Thanks

[cap2]

nice model, but if she's crying or has been crying there's a couple of key things i think you should include to convey the emotion.

- squint the eyes slightly
- add some slight rinkles to the brow/forehead (harder wrinkles will make her look mad)
- make the bottom lip a bit 'pouty' (raise the middle of the bottom lip slightly and maybe bring it forward a touch, bring the corners of the mouth down a bit) - i didn't have time to do it in the example pic

i hope you don't mind me messing with your image

[cap2]

my example looks a little angry, but just watch the wrinckles in the forehead, make them a little more suttle than i have done

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