Sharii
02-02-2008, 11:36 PM
Hello Everyone~
I'm working on 40 pages colored comic called "Ed & Ecchi", it's a story about a guy, a cat and a world that isn't very perfect. This is one of the most daunting comic project I have undertaken, since it's only my second comic in colors and the first one that I decided to fully paint it, panel by panel.
And the deadline is mid March. :eek:
I'd love to get criticisms and guidances as I am not very well-versed with this kind of style at all, I've been working only in black and white for far too long.
I might not be able to go back and fix the finished pages due to limited time, but I'll keep in mind all the criticism for the later pages and might be able to go back perfect them later after the deadline.
character designs and style test:
http://img.sharii.com/ed-copy2.jpg
First panel from first page:
http://img.sharii.com/ecchi010101.jpg
bottom half of first page: (yeah, I had to break it, my dingy mac mini can't handle the whole page in this size D: )
http://img.sharii.com/ecchi0102-2.jpg
Page 2-3 (spread pages for title):
http://img.sharii.com/ecchi02-03_02.jpg
This spread pages had to be broken into 3 pieces and put together later:
The sky:
http://img.sharii.com/ecchi02-03_03.jpg
bottom of background:
http://img.sharii.com/ecchi02-03_04.jpg
aaaand the whole pages:
http://img.sharii.com/ecchi02-03_08-colortest.jpg
first panel of page 4:
http://img.sharii.com/ecchi04-06.jpg
I realized that I spent too much time on this panel and I probably needed to tone down the details a bit if I have any hope to meet deadlines at all D:
I'm working on 40 pages colored comic called "Ed & Ecchi", it's a story about a guy, a cat and a world that isn't very perfect. This is one of the most daunting comic project I have undertaken, since it's only my second comic in colors and the first one that I decided to fully paint it, panel by panel.
And the deadline is mid March. :eek:
I'd love to get criticisms and guidances as I am not very well-versed with this kind of style at all, I've been working only in black and white for far too long.
I might not be able to go back and fix the finished pages due to limited time, but I'll keep in mind all the criticism for the later pages and might be able to go back perfect them later after the deadline.
character designs and style test:
http://img.sharii.com/ed-copy2.jpg
First panel from first page:
http://img.sharii.com/ecchi010101.jpg
bottom half of first page: (yeah, I had to break it, my dingy mac mini can't handle the whole page in this size D: )
http://img.sharii.com/ecchi0102-2.jpg
Page 2-3 (spread pages for title):
http://img.sharii.com/ecchi02-03_02.jpg
This spread pages had to be broken into 3 pieces and put together later:
The sky:
http://img.sharii.com/ecchi02-03_03.jpg
bottom of background:
http://img.sharii.com/ecchi02-03_04.jpg
aaaand the whole pages:
http://img.sharii.com/ecchi02-03_08-colortest.jpg
first panel of page 4:
http://img.sharii.com/ecchi04-06.jpg
I realized that I spent too much time on this panel and I probably needed to tone down the details a bit if I have any hope to meet deadlines at all D: