Character: dog cartoonish

[MattDubs]

i'd need to see it with eyes to judge how the ears should go, but from what i see here, i'd have to say pointy

[bigB]

I agree with njtwilight that you have to model it a bit further to be say what kind of ears it needs...but looking at it now I say hanging down.....

but when you proceeded it's easyer to say it.

[rrobert]

hmmm :shrug: it is too early to judge wheter this model is good or bad.. But his nose shouldn't be to shiny, I think.
Could be nice.. I'll await more wip-stills. oke? :wavey:

[EvilBasterd]

I think that the nose looks like black glass. I think a bump map should be use, because the texture of a dog nose in general is rough and maybe you should cutdown the shinyness.

But hey, it's WIP! Still thinks the idea is cool and the rest of the model looks OK, so keep up the good work:thumbsup:

[Beechdbum]

hey thanks for your comments all post an update later tonight when i get the chance as for the nose first my original concept was for a stuffed animal look for the dog but i agree that the nose is too shiny also there was a problem with the symetry object so it mite look odd because of that

[Beechdbum]

added eyes, changed head shape slightly and lowered relictivness of nose, please C&C

[Flash FROG]

Nice model.:beer:
I think the ears should be up and pointy.
It might make the image look a little more cartoony, I think at least.

[Beechdbum]

redid the whole model i went with the pointy ears liooks kinda like a fox now

[Beechdbum]

I added eyes but im not sure if i should make them more cartoonish i also changed the li

[rikrog]

perhaps it's just the colour, but it looks like a fox?

[Beechdbum]

ive started to model the body and its turnning out horrible so id really appreciate heavy critiques dont worry about the texture or the nose thos have already been fixed

[BlackWolf]

hmm, it looks like a fox head so id say follow the style through, make it more skinny with a few more visible joints and give it a neck. or do it another way its your call.

[belgon]

I added eyes but im not sure if i should make them more cartoonish i also changed the lighting and the texturehttp://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/3d/newdog2.jpg


!!haha
it seems look a fox ! not a dog !

[Voron]

This will look really neat animated

[mijaba]

maybe stretch the muzzle out a little because it looks kinda catlike despite the tongue.

[Rofideo]

your fox need fangs and a furry tail ;-)

Well if you want to give him a more dog stile, thin it a little
You see the Mask?

Keep working man

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